senciman

A see a man alone in the world where big brother has gone amuck. Spheres fly past him recording everything in their path as they go. A door opens, a beautiful young woman emerges. In her arms she holds a rifle, carefully she takes aim, from behind an old garbage bin, and takes aim at the sphere, It goes down. The man is in shock. For the first time in his life he knows he can say no. The woman runs past him, he runs after her. She hears him, turns and aims her rifle at him. "I mean you no harm", he utters, "I want to help". "Come", she replies. She leads him through alley and cracks in the city he had never even thought could exist. "We're here", she tells him, turning around to face him, "this is the base from which we fight". The man drops his skin, revealing his true form: A machine, a thinking machine. The machine laughs, thinking he has one, but then as one click after another is heard, he feels the sting of a hundred guns.

John

I like the intro...The sound effects r difrnt! KEep it up!

Nice track with a coherent idea. I feel like it would gain a lot from an accelerating tempo throughout the song, maybe if it ended 5 or 10 BPM faster than it started.

Great suspense, very dramatic content. I'd bring that bassline up front, though. Give it some volume, and put alot more bass into the drums. The snare makes this song feel week, thats the only downside IMO.

Sounds great, loving this track. Keep 'em coming.

Well - this is a dark track man and I really dig the use of the Quake IV game samples here - very cool. Like the FM hi-pass filtered pads as well as the dubby percussion - all this adds to the mysterious and suspense of the song! Perhaps I may've added some LFO envelope to the 4 note low lead ostenato that plays after around 3:30. But, nice track indeed, bruv! --Davey--

I think you have some good ideas with regards to vocal manipulations and general track theme using a hard sine kick and detuned rave pads. However, I do feel that the overall substance needs to be stronger. Now this may be just my personal preference but I may have incorporated some manic prodigy style hard d&b percussion and had some detuned rave stabs along the way, if for no other reason than to give this track that real 'Wow! factor. Plus I think it would be cool to vary the bassline with another exciting section of Phat enveloped LFO hooks just to keep the listeners on their toes, so to speak. I think this track has some promise but if you went for a re-version with more variants as described above you'd get yourself a whole load of attention for sure. Thanks for sharing, Greetz, --Davey--

industrial jungle dubstep....nice!
this is dark. love your wobble. i only wish it was a bit more prominent in the piece. love the treatment and use of the vox...adds an eerie ethereal vibe to the piece. very creative.
nice job!

Quite dark this track, interesting though, thought it could do with a few more breaks in the beat, keep up the good work..
Just a note. i've been on Looperman for only a few months now and really you dont need to ask for reviews man, this is a good community here, put your tracks up and people will listen.

Peace.

-FT-

H.A.L.L.9001 is speaking.My friend we are living music planet.Pls don't offer bargaining.If you love a track or if you feel any thing you can reviewing.This is enough.From you to me,from me to you is not help us for find to good.I liked to listen this track.
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