um...its okay. I like it. I think the beat could be heavier. like a better snare. I think you could add more to the song instrument wise as it gets pretty repeative. the hook i really dig. its fun and catchy, though for it I'd bring in a synth to really empathize it.
Defo potential. I think you really got something
Dj
Thanks we appreciate the feed back.. Yes I agree with synth. But I tried it and for some reason it wasn't sounding right. It was seeming as if we were trying to throw too much into a small space. Especially with the fast hi hats
feel the passion and the conflicted emotion. Did a good job. It reminds of my "making sure its making Sense". The only critism is the choice to double the hook so many time. You have a good voice and the multiple layers sound distracting.
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Defo potential. I think you really got something
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