I thought at times the song flow was going a certain direction. Then it sounded like too many things going on. I really couldnt get a feel for where the song was going. The drums were too low and need to stick out a little more. The flow from the verses to the transitions and chorus should be better put together. Too many spaces between the transitions and no drum rolls and a way to bring you into that next riff. If you are still kinda new to this then no worries, we all start off rough. Otherwise, I hope you dont take offense to this review. I have 34 years of experience with being in bands and writing music so I was just trying to offer some advice.
I'm not sure where the song begins, it almost sounds like a solo jam with four separate instruments. The piano with the double kick works well (@ 1:10) and could be made into something unique.
yes, you alright, but i couldn't and i can't do something unique because i don't best Metal loops, so if you know other free sites for Metal loops tell me, and i don't work for other tracks cause's loops too.and thank you for your comment, and i wait for other comment for more experience.
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