Is that you singing, if so good job. That is a pretty nice track. I like the beat and the melody. One of the best love songs I heard so far. With that said, I think the ending needs some work, but everything else not bad. Well done, keep up the good work.
Hi LisMarie, you know I am a fan, but please this autotune is getting anoying and I still miss structure in your songs, If you work on that you're gonna be great!!!
You hava a great voice however the vocals sound too distant almost like your using some kind of hall open room effect. you would sound great with just a slight reverb and straight vocals
This is hella nice. you've got great vocals. ever wanna work with a southern quick-tongue rapper / male r&b artist, holla at me. I'll send you a few of my drafts. peace&ease.
you choose the right beat, but you should put away the auto tune effect. you have a very nice voice, just needs a bit work to complete it. i love rnb...so your voice is optimal for it.
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LM - it's so good hear you and esp to hear you in control of the situation in this song! That lower register you're singing in here is perfect for the theme and backing instruments. Powerful!
OMG.... hope u got my msg, we need to do some collabs for sure!!! i got u i think ur voice is outta this world cause it sounds SO good on whatever u use to record, u are comparable to: Ashanti, Letoya Luckette, a lil Christina Agulera, with some Keri Hilson on top... i luv it
I think the vocal ambience is OK, just the vocals are a fraction loud for the melody......other than that it is great.I have just downloaded some of your acapellas and will let you know when I have a track complete. I would also be interested in the vocals for this if possible.
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nice pace to the track, u've nailed the vocals. did u write up the lyrics as well? putting aside the recording bit i see that you really got feel to what you sing, i like the way your tone melds.beautiful. i like it. and i will certainly need your help.
Nice job, really a great melody, lyrics are very good, I agree with Chno on the vocal quality , the ambiance takes away from your voice. I am definitely not a good singer but I get my vocals to sound a 1000 times better by adding a slight chorus, mod delay, and a slight reverb. If you would like you could email a vocal sample without any effects or anything, totally dry, and I can see what kind of sound I can get, I can't guarantee it would be better, but I wouldn't mind trying. Nice track, I always like what I hear from you!!!
Im gonna send you the track dry and see what you can do with it..is that cool with you?? Cause Ive been playing around with the sound and Ive been trying to make it sound like a real song but its hard to please help! lol
Nice! I think if you were able to get yourself around some pro equiptment you would sound excellent. Diggin this song as well. I would really like to work with you on something. Anything. lol. Great voice! Kinda gotta Rhianna vibe on this one. Great stuff. Just need better recording quality.
i would love to work with you...I dont have alot of time mostly saturdays or sunday nights are good for me...but I will try my best to keep up with whatever you have planned...what type of equitment do you think I could get without being in debt lol
RE RECORD! Sounds,...ok as of now. I cant really tell what you are saying most of the time but I can hear the melody and its nice! I think this is the first time I checked out one of your tracks. I like your vibe. Im totally into making tracks like this. If you would be interested in working together let me know. I have a plethra of material posted. Check out some of the work I did with Truth. Very similar to this type of track. Mabey a collab with all three of use would be in order. Please contact me if you are interested at: conan_swanson@yahoo.com
Oh Im so aware that is sucks right now thats why it says demo I wanted to know if it even sounded good ya know the melody...lol..I will re record since Ive gotten good reviews on it!! I would love to work with you!!!..
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To say you did this as a quickie shows you have great somgwriting talent. If you got more time I'm sure you could produce something thats right up there with the top chart material. Having said that, this track is very infectious in that you just gotta keep listening..for me that's the hallmark of a well-crafted song in any genre. Lack of time is one of my issues also, but I would like to be involved in producing something you might do in the future.....Seeing as you're busy busy busy book me in for 2114..!!..lol...great song.
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listen to my rnb beats..have much of them.
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But nice beat and song.
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