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I like it, except for the guitar-y sound, which doesn't fully fit, in my mind.
The rest of the track is really smooth and lovely, and I could imagine youight want a bit more edge to it, but it's not really working for me - without being able to tell you what I'd expect. Maybe something a bit slower and melodic?
Good luck, keep working at it because it's a really nice one!