Owenwho

I love that track. Im thinking of adding lyrics to it. Ill send you the track and let me know if you like it

I love that track. Im thinking of adding lyrics to it. Ill send you the track and let me know if you like it

Nice one...

Dope track Owenwho! Very chilled and laid back. This one's a Fav and downloaded. Nice work.

Crickets are brilliant! I like it although I would have them sound afar. The keys are excellent. Very creative work.

Hello Owenwho,

aha, you like it...

Not only you, but me too! Until 0:43 it sounds wonderfully harmonious with the piano slightly in front of the background accompaniment (the children's voices also fit beautifully into the background, even if I wouldn't want them throughout, but sporadically a little more audible; but of course that's a balancing act, you can also quickly bring it out of balance).

To my ears, the piano and background then swap positions from about 0:43 to 1:05. Overall, it gets louder and the original background accompaniment now sits in front of the piano, which gives up a bit of the lead as a result. To me, it's not quite as balanced as before.

From approx. 01:05 to approx. 01:19 you then take the piece back a bit overall - in my view correctly, in order to prevent monotony - which fits well in terms of timing.

Afterwards, the piano unfortunately retains its place in the background; as I said, in my opinion the piano should have the "say" overall, which by no means excludes taking the background sound temporarily to the front, but only for a short time.

Overall, I like your track very much, because you have designed it really nice harmonic flow, great!

Kind regards

Seelengold