TheConflictedFoxx

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Your beat is really not bad! I do not know how to express it but the fact that the rhythm seems unstructured is really cool!
It made me think of one of my favorite composers, Jay Dilla.
As you were told before, you have to work on your mix but keep it that way!
Regards,

First tip: don't be dismissive of yourself :)
Second tip: if you say something is "weird", change it :) (at least if you consider weird to be bad).
Personally I like it. It's quirky, but it has a good quirk, and I like your bass playing. Keep making many tracks!

Not so bad as i thought! As Danke said, mix should be pumped a little. Start from basics, listen million times to your mix, you'll be surprised how much improvement you can do!

what advice do you need? at this age I could not approach the music from the front or back ... :-)

real cool song, weird as you wrote but also creative ... maybe the mix (if any) should be pulled up, but just a little ...

hats off, Danke