I think the muzic and vocals are in different keys. Maybe upload the instrumental as well for collaboration? Maybe also change the beat and add a part that is different to change it up a bit. :-)
this is a cool acapella and that guitar riff is good too...hope you'll looking for some 'help' on the next step...new drums, bass and some kinda distorted guitar could easily lift this base up...good luck
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