BryceKnight

Great work! This sounds professional and radio ready. Nice collaboration. My only critique is for the ending. I think it would have sounded smoother if the whole song faded out instead of having the instrumental then the vocals fade out. But that's just personal taste. Regardless, nicely done.

loving it for the mood and melodics — this is a really good song, it’d be cool to hear it with a deeper mix!

great track ...

vox are outstanding but a tad bit harsh on my humble opinion ...
and bass or bass synth is very much missing ...

handshake, Danke

I fw the emo/lil peep style but I feel like the reverb is a tad overkill on the vocals. What i do personally is get the wet/dry of the reverb into a place that sounds good to me and then turn it down a bit below that. Also idk if you made the instrumental but it's a tad muddy from the guitar being quite high in the mix and having a lot of low end but things like that get fixed just by mixing experience over time so keep it up bro! Apart from those two little issues I love the stacked vocal melodies, the lyrics and the vibes man, keep it up!

Let's get this game going!!