BryceKnight

Great work! This sounds professional and radio ready. Nice collaboration. My only critique is for the ending. I think it would have sounded smoother if the whole song faded out instead of having the instrumental then the vocals fade out. But that's just personal taste. Regardless, nicely done.

I fw the emo/lil peep style but I feel like the reverb is a tad overkill on the vocals. What i do personally is get the wet/dry of the reverb into a place that sounds good to me and then turn it down a bit below that. Also idk if you made the instrumental but it's a tad muddy from the guitar being quite high in the mix and having a lot of low end but things like that get fixed just by mixing experience over time so keep it up bro! Apart from those two little issues I love the stacked vocal melodies, the lyrics and the vibes man, keep it up!

Let's get this game going!!