Ehbadya

It's nice. Among the drums there's a little rim-shot or tapping sound that I found quite distracting; I think it's around 5 kilohertz. It's also possible the drums as a whole are a little too loud. We'd be able to hear your vocals better if you brought them down but that balance is always up to personal taste. It could do with a bassline too but not necessarily. I think the breathy timbre of the vocals works with the song really well.

You nailed it, Ehbadya.

Very pleasant creation to listen to, well done.

Wonderful sleepy ethereal vibe and lyrics v well done

Hello Ehbadya, very nice piece....I agree, your vocals are excellent but they are overshadowed by the percussions, its a beautiful track my friend otherwise.

I started with the title, which lets us know there is poetry to deal with, and it is really beautiful, as is the poem itself. It's lyrical and imaginative, with truths that touch everyone. The way you worked on this piece is so sweet and joyful; it is a wonderful song and your voice fits so well. I really enjoyed your track.
Best regards, Anthony

What an instantly captivating tune! Your voice is quite dreamy. Digging the drums that come in and pick up that energy! What did you use to record your vocal? I like the vibe it has. If I can offer only one small criticism, the vocal tends to get buried a little bit by the drums in some parts - but it's not a dealbreaker by any means. Overall a great tune to study to! Good stuff here!

a very creative song

Hey bro super cool track! more of this please

Great track, love the vocals

Sounds great.
Cool vocal edits.

I'm not sure this one would be EDM, maybe electronic, but interesting nonetheless.

As Dan mentioned, this one is very unique and it was a pleasure to listen to. Nice work!

Unique sounding track. I really dig it!
Great job!

Great song, good vibe, the beautiful voice, like it a lot. Just the end sounds like it was cut off unexpectedly.

Amazing vibe. Really cool track. I like it!

I like your song due to its virtually hypnotic vibe. Your voice is also beautiful but needs more prominence in my opinion. A simple duplication should do the trick.

you have a very nice voice!

I actually really love this vocal. Are you maybe interested in collab?

Good tune and beats accompanied by even better vocals. Nice job!

Good job on the composition and the choice of sounds, the voice reminded me of the alternative rock from the 90s (not sure about K-Pop, I have no idea how that sounds lol)

Wow that bass - the female vocal has perfect attitude also for this song

Beautiful guitar work - love these lyrics 'I thought I'd die
I fought and cried

I was the only one who had to go decide'. An unusual yet innovative track

There's great raw talent here, and plenty of potential for your music-making journey. You write beautiful lyrics, and your guitar perfectly complements your voice. It is a nice effort, and with time and persistence, you can refine your sound. After all, a voice paired with a guitar can always be a winning combination.
Best wishes, Anthony

Nice tune and solid vocals. Enjoyed listening.