To help:I think if you transpose the musicto Cm instead of Gm, I think you should be golden. Again, my silly way of listening to music, feel free to ignore. Have fun!
Sorry, that was very harsh, and I should have explained what I meant. Your loop is I think in Gm, eg Gm Eb Dm. However he repeatedly sings a couple notes that don't really fit in that chord progression, including an Ab that stickjs out to me.
Another example is at 1:36 where the Eb he sings doesn't match what I hear in the music (Gm).
Anyway, my ears, my opinion, if you disagree that's great of course. Keep making music!
The intro is very pretty, but the vocals don't match the music unfortunately. So this is Michael Mayo? Are you him? Trying to understand what is original :D
Unfortunately I think the music goes well with the lyrics. Yes the lyrics are michael mayo and no I am not him I'm only the producer of the music on this track.
Hi! My name is Sergey, and Im the director of the film "The Droppers," which is currently being filmed in Russia. Were working on a crime thriller with intense scenes and a dynamic plot, and I really liked your track [Track Name]. It fits perfectly with one of our key scenes.
I understand that your music is valuable, and unfortunately, were working with a limited budget right now. However, I would love to use your track in the film, and Im happy to offer you full credit in the end titles, as well as an opportunity for your music to be featured in a movie, which could bring additional exposure to your work.
If youre interested, Id be glad to discuss this in more detail.
Thank you for your time and creativity!
Best regards,
Sergey
Director of the film "The Droppers"
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Another example is at 1:36 where the Eb he sings doesn't match what I hear in the music (Gm).
Anyway, my ears, my opinion, if you disagree that's great of course. Keep making music!
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I understand that your music is valuable, and unfortunately, were working with a limited budget right now. However, I would love to use your track in the film, and Im happy to offer you full credit in the end titles, as well as an opportunity for your music to be featured in a movie, which could bring additional exposure to your work.
If youre interested, Id be glad to discuss this in more detail.
Thank you for your time and creativity!
Best regards,
Sergey
Director of the film "The Droppers"
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