dpgeezy

love the feel and the melody and the use of violins i personally would of put a heavoier deeper beat to it and a stronger bassline but otherwise its awesome

for a 1st track its pretty good but i agree with protege defo needs a few level adjustments and a little extra :)

You definitely need to turn up the instrumentation and lower the drums a bit, but overall not bad for one of your first tracks. Maybe add some variation, cuts, snare rolls to spice things up.