brandon9594

Great beat. Much enjoyed.

John

nice, beat love the mellow ,but it play over and over u need something else there for the 8bars.let me explain.

1. 4 or 8 bars are for intro.
2. is 8 bars verse.
3. third is 12 or 16 bars

then repeat step 2 and 3

there you will have next basic track for start.

keep up the good job,
lovens

just sounds funky andre 3000 maybe but idk it just sound funny 5 0ut of 10

yea i feal that for yoa nigga well cool because it a nice beat 7 out of 10

If you haven't done any EQing you DO HAVE TO WORK ON IT. I didn't say you were terrible at EQing. Bayonetta is very hardcore, whoever said it sucks, doesn't have a clue about games. The most respected games mag on the Planet Famitsu of Japan gave it a perfect rating of 40/40, which about 10 games in history have managed.

Don't get upset with advice you get on here, you're going to need allot of it lol. So better start listening.

owwwwww...that lil high end hurt me off the batt....

it is repetitive.....i mean to say that it is not real bad....but practice makes better...and your tunes are short

lulz....this is nifty and its done just like that?

Devil May Cry huh? Fam, have you played Bayonetta? Same guy that made DMC's new game and it's incredible. One of the best games of the year, just takes some time to get good at. Also AKIRA is one of the best films ever.

I've done a remix of one of the tracks from Bayonetta, It's on my page called "Blacklisted".

Good to see another Video Game fan in here.

As for the track, you need to work on the mixing and EQ and then bring in an element that brings it all together, it's too disjointed at the moment. Keep it up man.

interesting ...... you did a good job here.....keep it up

Considering that this one is a first for you, I definitely think you did a very good job. I listened to it once and then now a second time to give you a bit of feedback. The track has a very minimalistic beat and progression with a nicely laid out melody-backing and a good lead. I also like the simple but good balance of the pads that play in the background. Very nice.

I would suggest you give the main melodies a bit of delay. This way it fills the track a bit more. Try a 3 or 4 step setting and see how it fits, or just experiment. Delays are a great way to add fullness to a track from very simple instruments and I think this one will benefit greatly. Also, a little bit of reverb on the hats, snare (clap) and melodies to create a sense of space. The kick feels a little overpowering in consideration to the rest of the instruments...give it a small reduction so it balances out a bit.

I also did not hear a bassline on this one which may explain why I sensed the kick to be a bit prominent. Add a basic one to fill in the bottom-end, a good try/test would be to use the same notes (the first few notes) of the synth line that comes in like an arpeggio (7s) and let that section play on the c3 range or so. And possibly hear the results and change a few notes.

It is a little short, but it is expected as it is a first one. My very first track was about the same length as well, and much less complex than this one.

Keep up the great work.

aye dis sounded a lil weird, but it was okay, i liked it, but i couldnt get the full effect of the beat cuz im deployed right now, but yo keep up da good work.

Busta Rhymes and Luda could make this a hit

THIS BEAT IS FIRE NOT DONE BUT IT COULD GO IN SO MANY DIRECTIONS NICE JOINT KEEP GRINDING!!!!!!!FAMEZFLAMEZ 1

lol nah man this is better than a soulja boy beat...the sound of me typing on the keyboard right now is better than a soulja boy beat...keep producin!

I like the feel of this track--I can hear Too Short or MC Eiht on it circa 94.