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Very goth!

Very nice rock vocal timbre. If you clean the mix up a bit you can make this sound like radio material. Great stuff!

Very nice Bauhaus inspired drum. Eldrich inspired lyrics but without the gothic pretence. Looking forward for more!

You had me as soon as the guitar kicked in.

Absolutely loved the hook, got the same vibes as other posters. Also heard a bit of Lou Reed and Rick Ocasek in your vocals and for some reason I kept wanting to shout the Runaways hook "Che-che-che-Cherry Bomb!" and howl like on Warren Zevon's "Werewolves of London". Great job. I'm faving this.

Definitely not bad for first time vocals. I really like the backing music. Very moody.

Hey I really like this! Don't be so hard on yourself, this came out good. Cool chord progression, and the vocal is cool. You don't need a lot of nice equipment to make good music, just artistry. You are showing it.

Don't know if you know him, but I kind of get Falco vibes of this track :)

Nice track!!

A-fuqin'-mazing! Played twice, fell in love with twice, wondered die killed by goth rock girl (that i know for real) twice, set as a fav tw.. er... once.
In the second listening i paid attention to technical stuff: i think that everything is at the right place. Only thing i argue is about vocals: in some parts seems to be not in tone (but at the same time, this make touchable the feelings of performer). Instrumental are stronger and intense (and is def fine) but vocals are a tad weak. Enhance the brilliance.

92 minutes bowed in front of his majesty.

cool...really cool...Tarantino feel with Trio (you know Da,da,da...)

great work, handshake, Danke

Oh My Goth!
I like lo fi and this delivers.
Cru

My grandmother escaped hungary when they were invaded. Luckily they didn't find out she was jewish since her mother re-married a non-jewish man when she was young. She still practiced her religion at a young age, but was unable to do so for many years approaching her countries invasion.

Beautiful track!

not really what I go for the structure was good. theres alot of peeps looking for that sound, i would say keep it up. good job

2:05 wow... Powerful piece and so vivid. Peace!

Ronabo

hello!

i'm not surprised to read on the comment of TheNyctopianthe reference to Front242 and others bands from the nineties which made during this years the "war beat" genre (an extansion of the new beat).

this kind of sound deliver strong message with a lot of sensibility and i'm just a musician so i won't talk about anything else than musical creativity here :)

i like the dark approach, each sound until the drums create this atmosphere, the render is perfect and the purpose is nicely targeting!

congratulations for the performance

Bleep

It's been many years since I have listened to industrial (probably the 90's when I was heavily into Skinny Puppy, Front 242, Frontline Assembly, etc) and I must say this is a really nice throwback for me. Great job!

Good track. Shame about the comments by wahoco!

This has a really cool, metallic, industrial sound. Nice thud from those lower drums too. Good synth lead. Warm but also cold, legato notes.

2:06 good breakdown and break from the main beat.

This is kind of eerie and unsettling and could be very useful soundtrack music.

Congratulations.

Amazing track. It really creates the dark atmosphere of what things were at that time. Your grandmother must have been a very courageous and amazing lady.

I like when it hits 2:05 and by "like" I mean it's pretty damn terrifying which I assume is what you're going for. If the subject matter wasn't so dark I would maybe say it sounds cool in a "Quake theme music" kind of way.