you have a great voice
very dope vocal range
would be great to hear more from you
so much hidden talent on this site
so glad i caught this
great work , wow
arty is a really nice producer ive done some work on his productions before
anyways, keep it up! please, for all of us
inspiration... truly
much love
-CAP
Oh my gosh! Thank you!! That really made my day :) but don’t worry, there’s plenty more where that came for sure! I’m just getting started!! :D and yess, arty is literally the greatest, I’m so glad that I came across this masterpiece of a beat!
I think you did a good job on the lyrics and the lead melody. I do like that you took chances (the jazzy stylings in certain sections, specifically at 1:34-1:36 lyric "I'm really happy that you found me").
I agree with both Danke and iamarty. I personally love the tone of your voice, and since it takes courage to put your work out for public critique, I think as time goes on and with more experience you will "hear" when the harmony you've created doesn't quite work with the chords in a song. That being said, singing a pleasing melody over original music takes skill, and writing original lyrics is even harder. I think you've succeeded at both. Please keep at it, because you've got talent.
Hey, man! I’m gonna be real with you, I was literally up that same night writing lyrics until I got done, which was like 3 or 4 in the morning. And it was soo many things that I could of done with this beat, so I had options about what to do with this work of art! I just love that you felt the same way that I felt about 1:34-1:36! Thank you, I just want to show people what I can do with my voice and I think that this website is the best way for me to do so! And I see what you mean by the “more experience” part but once again, thank you so so much for your perspective about the song! I greatly appreciate your feedback :)
yeah, it's unique...like a song from the 50's, 60's with gramophone...fantastic piece of music here...off keys??? that's not the point here, if there is a mistake at all ...
Same! I just love everything about the beat, that’s why I told myself that I need to sing and write something off of this because.. wow! But thank you soo much for your feedback, thank you!!! :)
on sunshine by oheshawn
very dope vocal range
would be great to hear more from you
so much hidden talent on this site
so glad i caught this
great work , wow
arty is a really nice producer ive done some work on his productions before
anyways, keep it up! please, for all of us
inspiration... truly
much love
-CAP
on sunshine by oheshawn
I think you did a good job on the lyrics and the lead melody. I do like that you took chances (the jazzy stylings in certain sections, specifically at 1:34-1:36 lyric "I'm really happy that you found me").
I agree with both Danke and iamarty. I personally love the tone of your voice, and since it takes courage to put your work out for public critique, I think as time goes on and with more experience you will "hear" when the harmony you've created doesn't quite work with the chords in a song. That being said, singing a pleasing melody over original music takes skill, and writing original lyrics is even harder. I think you've succeeded at both. Please keep at it, because you've got talent.
on sunshine by oheshawn
amazing!!!
Danke
on sunshine by oheshawn
on sunshine by oheshawn