Kinda taken aback by the vocal clips you used, think it could have been mixed better maybe? But i'm all for them. Other than that I think the track is structured great and I like how full it sounds. Favorite thing about it is either the guitar loops use or the bouncing synth thingy.
It's been a while since I was on.. if you want to give the vocals a go.. they are typed in the lyrics box and I would love to hear anyone's rendition on what I've written. Leave a comment download the track and do your thing.. make sure you drop a link so I can get a listen. Thanks to everyone for your support...
hey buddy, i actually really love this and the piano is spot on and the drums are great.... i really hope to hear a mastered version of this soon though, kinda afraid of blowing a speaker at the moment, no offense intended.
Now this is a track that still is in a very rough state. Still i like the elements you used in this track. Although its prety unbalanced it still sounded ok enough but it could have been way better. Also this is raw material, meaning you need to mix it down a lot. Cause now it sounded unbalanced and way to noisy. But i do get some of the industrial elements you used in here. The vocals were prety interesting as well. But like i said in this state its still a rough diamond that need some polishing. Have a good one, Verdi
I'm going to mix it down more i just wanted to get a cleaner vocal mix up. This track will eventually become a masterpiece it's just gonna take some time.
Thank you so very much. I really do love constructive criticism. I know i need to work on my mastering skills. Its a skillset that Always needs improvement.I am glad you enjoyed this track.. there will always be more coming.
I loved the ring to this track. Not sure about the robot vox like elements though. But the track on itself is a solid one. In a funny way it did gave me some 80s vibes as well (In a electronic & synth sense kinda way). With the certain elements you used in this track. So yeah all in all, i do like the track except for the vox parts. So yeah still a job well done none the less. Have a good one, Verdi
I noticed when i was mastering this track that my vocals had come out to bellish. I appreciate the statements you've made i will be remastering the vox and reuploading the track.
thank you very much.
Grimm
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I love this, I believe with little remix can be a winner.
Well done mate
You are great,
Jamid
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Really well done.
Faves.
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Brilliant Well done.
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Now this is a track that still is in a very rough state. Still i like the elements you used in this track. Although its prety unbalanced it still sounded ok enough but it could have been way better. Also this is raw material, meaning you need to mix it down a lot. Cause now it sounded unbalanced and way to noisy. But i do get some of the industrial elements you used in here. The vocals were prety interesting as well. But like i said in this state its still a rough diamond that need some polishing. Have a good one, Verdi
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Thought I heard "Put the lotion in the basket" in there, ha! ;)
Wayne
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I loved the ring to this track. Not sure about the robot vox like elements though. But the track on itself is a solid one. In a funny way it did gave me some 80s vibes as well (In a electronic & synth sense kinda way). With the certain elements you used in this track. So yeah all in all, i do like the track except for the vox parts. So yeah still a job well done none the less. Have a good one, Verdi
thank you very much.
Grimm