Love the mood you created here. The guitar feels rough and real, and the vocals give it just the right character. Has that classic feel but with a gritty twis! Great listen.
The lo-fi guitar sounds great on this. The vocals fit the mood of the music just right. It's like a grunge version of Simon and Garfunkel. Yeah, I like this, great track.
Awesome acoustic song. How beautifully the guitar sounded. It is always a great pleasure to listen to natural sounding instruments, played so well.
You can make real pleasant music and you should try it more often.
Best regards, Anthony
This is fantastic. Adore the vocal work and the doubling sounds terrific. This gives me a "Daughter" feel, the song "Youth" specifically. I also love how raw and emotive this pieces feels. The guitar compliments everything so nicely, really inspires me to start writing acoustic stuff again! Glad you shared this.
-BN -._.-
Man this is a beautiful piece of music. Love it very much. As someone said, the vocals could be a hair higher on the mix. Don't be afraid to bring them forward, they're very good. And I love your lyrics too. Tumeke bro.
Thanks for your kind words :) and yes you're right, I agree that the vocals could be higher. On bandlab, there's a plugin where you can reduce the noise so the "ess" and "t" sounds aren't as prominent, guess I overdid it this time haha
Of course! I'm glad you liked it :) here's the lyrics
It's okay to take a while, once you're here
I know, you're not the same as yesterday
and everything you felt seemed so real
Well here's a fact
you're still here
going through
the motions
Even on my worst days will you still be here?
Through everything we made no this can't be real
Can you just wait a minute? don't go
We said some things we didn't - please don't
I never thought that I would make this mistake
I didn't think that I would ask you to stay
I shall not resent you, for your dreams
We said some things we didn't really mean
(I just want to express how I feel)
This is real raw brilliant talent here wow! I luv that almost vulnerable feeling it has which is just captivating!.. Stellar! work here indeed and very much enjoyed by me. NICE! vocals :)
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You can make real pleasant music and you should try it more often.
Best regards, Anthony
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-BN -._.-
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It's okay to take a while, once you're here
I know, you're not the same as yesterday
and everything you felt seemed so real
Well here's a fact
you're still here
going through
the motions
Even on my worst days will you still be here?
Through everything we made no this can't be real
Can you just wait a minute? don't go
We said some things we didn't - please don't
I never thought that I would make this mistake
I didn't think that I would ask you to stay
I shall not resent you, for your dreams
We said some things we didn't really mean
(I just want to express how I feel)
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This is real raw brilliant talent here wow! I luv that almost vulnerable feeling it has which is just captivating!.. Stellar! work here indeed and very much enjoyed by me. NICE! vocals :)
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