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jameswhistler

jameswhistler

Arnhem, Netherlands Antilles
Joined : 3rd Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
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igorsamanski
igorsamanski 5th Nov 2017 11:07 - 7 years ago

on Sparkle by jameswhistler
I'm listening to this with headphones and I don't know too much about house, but I feel that you should have, instead of kick - clap, kick - clap you should have kick - snare, kick - snare, and maybe the snare should have some reverb to make the track sound more powerful, also the synth that starts at 1:13 sounds a little too one-dimensional, maybe have a different synth that filters in and out or some kind of automation, the melodies are really good and the idea is too and many things, take in to account I have headphones on and I don't know what this sounds like on a radio or in car or something like that, but I like the overall idea, and the melodies, and the vocal parts, and beat, this sounds like something that could be commercial
jameswhistler
jameswhistler replied 5th Nov 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you so much for your feedback!
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