mrnw10

I feel this drums like a bit dirty or soemthing.
Lack of bass or second melody. Add more percussions for second half.

Definately miss some voice phrase.

INstruments choice is good. I like how this bass guitar or something sounds here. melody is very primitive but it's Ok for this.

Overal I would say this good but lack a progress. First half is great but second sounds just same.(well if you imgaine this as two parts)

Thanks. Hope you check out some my songs too.