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I saw an Interview with Dio talking about American Idol, he called it American Idiot, was all about how back before those shows artists had to really work to get noticed. Great job with this! really well done :D All you can do is stay at it and sooner or later dreams do come true :D

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bonne vois bien travailler
domr

That intro definitely made me want to continue. Only problem is there's quite a bit of noise on it, which continues. Can you find a way to remove the noise?

Really good singer. Whose vocals are they?

Good delay on her voice.

On 0:54 when that synth comes in, it could really do with some bass there. Maybe just put a sub bass underneath it to beef that section up.

Actually, I think there's a lack of bass at various other points, though sometimes it works fine (I can give you specific time references if you like).

Synth riff at 1:15 is wicked - just my kind of thing.

2:50 double time drums is brilliant. Wasn't expecting that but it's the kind of thing I like to do often in my music. Only problem is that those fast drums don't last long enough. Make them longer!

Lots of good stuff in this track and nice mix of the chosen elements and flavours but I feel it could be made much better and then be a really good piece of music and song.

Finally, sorry to hear about your friend. But this has a strong emotional depth to it so a good tribute to her memory. Well done and I hope you can make it even better.

wow is that you singing

i loved this track great lyrics. me and everyone can definetley relate to this track. great work, openminds.