Patrickzim

Diggin the trumpet & violin. Try some mix in the piano - just a tad monotonous. Other than that, with some lyrics, would be pretty sweet.

Good job.

- Memphis

sounds good in my opinion .... you did a good job here ... keep it up

this is nice,kinda like the halowwen sounds,needs more id say but soundin good nonetheless

digging the rock /hip hop you got happenining here, i've been trying to do that a little too, on a few tracks i did with fellow looperman gapjux's nice acapellas...keep them guitars rockin

vm01x

I think it has a great foundation,...it seems to be missing something. What? Im not sure but I feel there is something missing. I think what you have going on already is pretty solid now all you have to do is build a little.

like how you've incorperated the guitar into this track man, good beat too. like the work, im interested in doing something along the same lines. good stuff.
ThatcheR

i love orchestral in hip hop just take a listen to my 'big band' track and 'rememberance' and your see lol but this i love its awesome love the beat the dark feel everything bout this has hit written over it with the right lyrics:)

I like the orchestral sounds that are mixed in. I like the dark melody aswell. The piano is like in major so it sounds happier and it provides alot of contrast to the dark melody thats in "Minor"in the back ground if you know what im talking about. Any way i like the syncapated drums aswell. I think you did a good job with this.Keep it up

Considering that I dislike Hip-hop, you've got me interested in this track. It's got a great sound, and enough variation to hold my interest the entire time. I don't quite know what you've done before, but if you've improved, I'd say it's been by a great deal. Well done mate!

Yeah, I agree. This is super smooth and super hot. Nice work. If I had one complaint it'd be that I don't like abrupt endings that sound like the track got cut off before it finished. I prefer a more polished fade out or something. But still, good job!