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The ambience to this song is good, its well layed out especially for your first dubstep song. The voice works well too. Im not totally sold on the bass line though, I think the one thing about dubstep basslines are that they need to have so much work put into them, they are, after all, the key part of the song. I would try and make it alot deeper, a little like the basslien in, Rubber Chicken, by Caspa, that kind of bassline would work very well for this song. But its hard to achieve! A well rounded bassline is not easy and thats why they are famous for their music and we arn't lol :P

But a good effort all the same. Keep going.

nice im not real big on dubstep but this has a good feel to it keep up the good work God Bless

well likin the vibe !! nice wrk :) dub2zero

yes its dj rema-d,i like this tune,kinda creepy an dark.keep em cummin bless