Iv wrote 3 songs for my girl on this site...you should check them out man..i bet she loved it dude..you should put some singing over it!..i dont sing and a sung on mine..fist time singing too..so you have no excuse haha I wanna hear vocals dude..it would bring the song to life!
this track has absolutely great melody - tender, engaging and simple - and very good guitar and synths.
few comments if you dont' mind - I do feel that you need good bassline for this track (if the guitar work is yours - you can easily record a simple bass). and there's too much atmosphere in the drums - i would say that for this track you probably need something more flat 'joy-division'-like sound. but anyway that's only my feeling.
on The love song by wayne007
Iv wrote 3 songs for my girl on this site...you should check them out man..i bet she loved it dude..you should put some singing over it!..i dont sing and a sung on mine..fist time singing too..so you have no excuse haha I wanna hear vocals dude..it would bring the song to life!
Great track dude i really like it :)
Chris
on The love song by wayne007
few comments if you dont' mind - I do feel that you need good bassline for this track (if the guitar work is yours - you can easily record a simple bass). and there's too much atmosphere in the drums - i would say that for this track you probably need something more flat 'joy-division'-like sound. but anyway that's only my feeling.
enjoyed your track very much!
on The love song by wayne007
French Kid