kandi23

nice job for your first, only if i could say my first was that good

this shit is on some gza ft. mobb deep type shit (the infamous not the g-unit mobb deep)...nice track yo....if this is your first joint it won't take long for you to start making your own melodies, samples, etc....one

YEP A BIT CONTRASTING BUT YOU GOT THE RIGHT IDEA YOULL EVOLVE AFTER YOU GET INTO IT MORE.

Yo this is cool, it reminds me of that old school NYC hip-hop. Like a track that would be on an older Method Man joint. Only thing I would do is chop the strings up and maybe remove them from certain parts. That way is gives the beat a little time to breathe and also for variation. But thats just my opinion. You have a really nice track here though, and really not bad at all for your first track, peace
N18th

Nice beat, but I thought the strings were a bit repetitive. Maybe some variation?