Kish

yeah man im feelin this check my page for some beats!

tight track man, you should put a slight reveb on the vocals, it will smooth it out and sound better.

ya u need a good mic and beat needs work but sometimes its not the mic try different things to perfect the sound its not easy if u dont already kno but once u mske something as good as u can usin wat u got i kno itll be right not only to u but to others as well

i like it its cool man creative stuff man keep it up

yo this is pretty good man. i am an artist and i would love to collabo at any give time. hit me up at kingzofrap@gmail.com or here

WOooooOOOOOooo banger bro need DMX on dis for real lol keep bangin out over there B!

Ballin B good job wit dis one keep doin ur thang

Good track man, if you want to send me the individual elements to this, I'd be up for giving it a shine/mix for you. This is a good track, just needs refining. Get a better mic too fam, it's essential.

Cool idea man, just got to work on your delivery and flow. I know this is a chilled track, but the vocals need a little more power even for a chilled track. The vocal ideas are good man, believe in yourself a little more man, you can do this if you want to.

LYRICS IS HOT BEATS HOT BUT IT'S MISSING SOMETHING HOMIE GOTTA STAY ON BEAT OTHER THEN THAT DECENT TRACK KEEP GRINDING!!!!!!!!!!!!FAMEZFLAMEZ 1

dude this is a fresh ass track i think the vocals are to loud tho. but str8 up its ill as fuuhh. good lyrics to. keep em coming. let me kno if you touch up the vocals i would like to see it.

Nice beat dude like the harp!!!

but my opinion is that you should work on flow,,,it is just my opinion

Respect!!!!

RP

nice combo and the chorus is hot i see u put a little work in it
wait till ya blow up hators go be mad

absolutely love the beat....but your flow needs to be a lil faster in the beginning bruh......Chorus would sound BEAUTIFUL if you got a girl to drop it on this beat.....just droppin "Crowned Science".....your flow is a lil off beat near the end of the second verse as well....overall I'd redo this one wit a lil faster flow an a nice chicita voice for the chorus....on a scale of 1-10 Imma drop you a solid 7.5....Cause the BEAT IS ILLY!!!! ~KiNg OUT~

change the note of the bells and the pattern maybe something simple i do like your stnth bass and your drumline keep working

sorry, this was a remix between german and english haha...

yes i mean notes..

from the synth...i dont know if this synth bells or some ...
that ding ding ding ding dadading ^^...

that sounds like you were a beginner.
you have a lot of wrong tones in it...

good idea and flow, but with the right
tones would it be better.

try to bring everything on point.

listen to my newest one and you will understand what i mean

holla

this one is tight keep maken them beatz

Great organization and arrangement of materials - excellent changes.

Yo still like the track. That bell thats goes throughout the track doesnt do it for me. But it doesntkill the track. Maybe add a nice smooth sub bass to follow the synths would definately make it even hotter....................

Jesus Christ is Lord!!!!

Love these synths would like to remix it if I could. Definately a banger.

Hot Track,
Triumphant

Jesus Christ is Lord!!!

THE BEAT LOST ME IN THE FIRST 12 SECONDS I BET YOU GOT SOME BETTER 1S YOU CAN UPLOAD..

This is on a different tip for sure, wow, from the first seconds it's like a rolla coaster high up in the air, that beat is beyond bangin' man..this is cinematic..excellent work, entering this in the competition?
thanks for sharing your work!

victormusic01x..in the nyC listening to cutting edge music ..8)+

this is blazin' man, this would seriously be on point in a deep flick set in the city, i like the dropout in the intro, the staggered syncopation and the way u explore some nice harmony voicings along the way.Enjoyed this alot! Respect!

victormusic01x in the NYC..

I think this is great. I'm not a huge fan of the synth/creepy-organ thing. It's not horrible, I'm just not crazy about it. But everything else about this is great.