twd

Awesome twd.this is really unique and your voice is great.
The guitars sound good but it does make you want them more in your face but you know what,I just cranked the volume and I hear it's all there,just need to tweak the mix,I agree with tacatta and you can fix it,it's too good not to!
This is a track you want to keep talking about cause' like I said...it really is all there,just needs to be brought out.
I think this song is smokin'and I am no producer cause if I was I would be up all night workin' on this with you.
Very,very good.

Allen

twd replied Unknown

WOW!! ive had feedback on this song, most positive, but none as reassuring as yours Allen! It's reviews like this that inspire me! Im always complimented when someone connects with the song the way you did =))

Thanks also to the loops from Looperman included in this song that inspired the concept!

And YES your right.....it is too bad youre not a record producer! LOL

Tacatta 2nd Aug 2010 20:52 - 15 years ago

on Blood And Paper by twd

I dig the concept of what your doing here.I like the vocal effects you use through the main body of this song and also on the spoken parts.The guitar sounds really great,but is a little lost in the background.And its hard to pick up all of your lyrics,but I like what I do hear.(not sure if its the effects or the mix)I'm not trying to be critical,I think your very talented.I am by no means an expert but maybe you can bring the vocals and guitar more upfront in the mix.

twd replied Unknown

TY Tacatta

I appreciate your review. I have actually been trying to get better at "warming" the guitars and vocals in the mix a bit more. The fact that you have taken the time to critique the track specifically helps me to get better at trying to "perfect" the master. It really can be a daunting task but, without reviews and critique, its harder to gauge what I hear and what listeners want to hear.
Again, thank you! twd

Thethanx 30th Jul 2010 23:31 - 15 years ago

on Blood And Paper by twd

Is there a reason why it stops after a minute and then is followed by 4 minutes of silence? It also seems to start with no real intro it just starts. It's also all sort of muddied and hard to distinguish one part from another.

Otherwise I like the sound and it shows a lot of promise, I really want to hear this again once some work has been done on it. Keep workin at it.

*Edit- Still just cutting out after a one minute of playing, frustrating because it really is growing on me. I would love to make suggestions, but i get the feeling some of them might already be a part of the song... How/where/what are you uploading? It still seems like it starts in the middle too... On a lot of programs whatever you have selected at the time is what you export, maybe preview the mp3 before you upload it? Guitar does sound a bit clearer though, but I can't hear any bass really... may be the fault of the laptop speakers. I'll give a relisten through some headphones.

twd replied Unknown

im not sure what happened to the track but I appreciate your review. I have replaced the mp3 with the song in its entirity. =)) please feel free to drop by again and review it.

twd

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