Pretty much everyone in the reviews before me cover everything that I would consider revising, but I actually really liked every part of this song. The snares and the french horns really REALLY worked well for your piece, though there was one point in there where it sounded like it skipped a little. That's my nitpickery for ya. :p
Otherwise, fantastic job mate.
Oh, if you get a chance you should check out my track that you reviewed once more, I added a sh*t ton more.
Wow... this track goes everywhere. I really enjoyed the big brass sound that comes in halfway through.
The strings that are played around the ~3:00 mark and then cut out leave the track feeling very empty. It might work better to cut the drums only build, or add a quiet swell in the background or something. Right now it seems too hollow.
I love the way the synth comes back in. I love the driving sound over the quiet strings. That build is very well executed. It's a shame the track just sort of ends there.
At the beginning, you might want to try dropping the synth channels another 3-4db. They're still too forward for my tastes. YMMV.
Thanks! I've got a slightly tweaked, bit more synthy version basically done. I'll upload now that I've got the time. They're only subtle differences though, but it doesn't have the same ugly parts from this one.
honestly man i think its a good track
if i were you id go back and try to emphasize on some sounds
deff bring the snares out a lil might have to change a note here and there too but i think you could have something pimp.. - gotti
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on People of Ages by StenDarker
Otherwise, fantastic job mate.
Oh, if you get a chance you should check out my track that you reviewed once more, I added a sh*t ton more.
on People of Ages by StenDarker
The strings that are played around the ~3:00 mark and then cut out leave the track feeling very empty. It might work better to cut the drums only build, or add a quiet swell in the background or something. Right now it seems too hollow.
I love the way the synth comes back in. I love the driving sound over the quiet strings. That build is very well executed. It's a shame the track just sort of ends there.
At the beginning, you might want to try dropping the synth channels another 3-4db. They're still too forward for my tastes. YMMV.
Thanks again
on People of Ages by StenDarker
well done
Trax
on First Beat by StenDarker
you could work more on melody.. :)
this track just need a bit more work to make it great ;)
cheers.!
on People of Ages by StenDarker
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if i were you id go back and try to emphasize on some sounds
deff bring the snares out a lil might have to change a note here and there too but i think you could have something pimp.. - gotti
on UpBeat by StenDarker