This track has potential. I can tell your using fruityloops, I would consider adding more instrumental to the track. You got an asian sound going here, I would suggest using something from the plucked instruments, that and some kind of bassline.
i always enjoy having my tracks reviewed. i will definitely take your comments into effects and a reprise will be made. and u have a good ear, knowing that it was made by FL. good work :)
on The Hiragana Diaries by DJLightwerks7