gopostle

This is called storytelling. Something these popcorn rappers can't do. and the Eminem hook with the music set this off hard

that grenadine-drenched fight scene in the kitchen kills, echo Martin

that beat is clean i like i like

that beat is very flame there, but your flow crazy. i like this one. should be putting this one up for sum play. great work fam

really really wicked tune.
would love to get my hands on the pella too, for a new projekt...
seriously, this is the good shit.

Hi gopostle,
I agree with oasisduke... it's a great track and I suggest some simple melodic instrumental track as hook... it should work.
Good job.

this is definitely commercial, well done. nice, simple bouncy beat that is the perfect backdrop for your spit. the only thing i might suggest is adding a chick singing some counter hook. quite frankly, im not even sure it needs to be a female, just a melodically non complicated two line counter would bring some good texture to this already solid track.
cheers!