Cool fam, thanks for taking the time out to say so. Appreciate that. Check out my finished...ish tracks Blacklisted and Floating castle when you get a chance star. I'll be keeping a lookout for your new stuff. Nice one.
nice track...i try 2 mak stuff lik dis bt mine jus neva seems 2 com out rite..bt ill up load som mor nxt week cuz ive alredy uploaded 5 dis week n i cnt upload ny more..hey stick around cuz i mite ask u 4 pointers
hey dis beat go hard...i love da vocals n da bak...i love dat type of stuff..u tellin me keep it commin..mak sur u keepem commin..oh n i lik da preview u pt up 2day
Both just got to stay on our grinds fam, it's an on-going process. Nice one for taking the time mate, appreciate that. Check out Floating Castle if you like the bars in this one, it's got the same MC Final Outlaw and another sick underground guy called Niles. I think you'll like it fam.
The energy level of this is at 1000 and thats on scale of 1 to10!
man! love the backbone ruff on this and the sound used! wake the dead kinda outlook!! that riff is major rockin guy!
*grin*
i likey.
if this was one of your first attempts at MCing, i would love to hear what you can do mow...cause this was solid.
and i agree that the beat is naughty.
..i adore your voice.
;)
:: the "when" is so often irrelevant...just THAT you found your talent is the important thing. ::
**lol everyone calls me "man" and "brah" and "dude" on here..i hardly notice it anymore**
Thanks man, yeah, MCing is the one thing in music I don't have to bang my head against a brick wall to get good at. It's just a shame I didn't realise that until I tried it last year.
: )
Ah, OK. I just realised you're female! I was thinking "this guys friendly!" Didn't mean to be calling you man and such. Thanks for taking the time to review and reply. Much appreciated. If you think I'm an alright MC check out my tracks up here called Blacklisted and Floating Castle got a couple of the best NY underground rappers featured on them that put me to shame. Thanks again.
thanks man, nice one. Fam, you should have a listen to the other ones I got up here. Blacklisted and Floating Castle, they feature two of the sickest underground MC's in NY right now. Thanks for taking the time anyway man.
Nice feelin it. Likin that UK accent. Hook is off the chain. And you sir are no UK eminem and that in my book is a good thing. Keep your sound comin, good work. Excellent writting skills with voice execution.
Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
Thanks man, it's a pop track, but I like to think it's quite a sick one. Going to get an actual singer to redo the chorus tho! Haha! Glad you like it man and thanks for taking the time to say so. You should have a listen to my other tracks Blacklisted and Floating castle, that's some of my more underground stuff, featuring some SICK mc's. Peace fam.
thx for ur reviews,i like this 1 i dont normally listen to this style but i do like eminems traks it reminded me little of him pitty it cut off at end but i still enjoyed it thx alot
Nice one for the review star, glad you like it. Check out Blacklisted and Floating Castle if you want to check out my more hard-core stuff, features 2 of the best underground MC's in the states right now. Safe fam.
wow! this s*** is off the hook! love how the guitar and piano fit together. everything about this track works. "murder you in front of your crib...like John Lennon" nice!
I think the lyrics sound good because its balanced out with a low base sound. A lot of lil wayne songs are like that, which is why I think they often sound dope. The lyrics sound good too. My only thought would be to maybe break the chorus up with another line after saying it three times but thats just something I would try. Good work!
I agree with you actually, that was what I told Final when he sent me this rough. Wether he changed it or not I don't know till I get the final version back.
Agreed tho. Nice one for taking the time fam, appreciate that.
I do admire what you have going on here, Your beats are unique and seem to grab your attention. Heck, check out my you-tube, i would love to take a couple of your tracks and host them for ya,, nice work here...
Beat starts off with a EPIC feeling. Gives me goose bumps(no homo). What ever was done to the hook sounds very good. He used good words to match the bassline for the hook. I feel that makes or breaks a hook. What I do not like is, his style on this one. Comes off Eminem-ish to me. Sounds tight, Im just not a fan of that style. Beat definately EPIC though, much props.
Feelin it. Good work with the beat break down. Love piano's, sounds sick with the guitar. Both rappers came with their A game.
Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
Man what a groove!
Where's the Instrumental?
If you let the music introduce the lyrical flow
it will inhance this track so much more ...Try it with an intro!
Not saying it's not good the way it is, it's just that the music is bangin'!
PEACE!
You're right man, there's no instrumental on this one to keep peeps from looping a part of it. As the whole loop of the track is only 4 odd bars and someone could easily record it into their soundcard and just loop it.
Arrangement will be way more complex when it's actually finished. Thanks for the review and taking time anyway fam, nice one.
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man! love the backbone ruff on this and the sound used! wake the dead kinda outlook!! that riff is major rockin guy!
allways suprizing me!
Bm;)
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i likey.
if this was one of your first attempts at MCing, i would love to hear what you can do mow...cause this was solid.
and i agree that the beat is naughty.
..i adore your voice.
;)
:: the "when" is so often irrelevant...just THAT you found your talent is the important thing. ::
**lol everyone calls me "man" and "brah" and "dude" on here..i hardly notice it anymore**
: )
Ah, OK. I just realised you're female! I was thinking "this guys friendly!" Didn't mean to be calling you man and such. Thanks for taking the time to review and reply. Much appreciated. If you think I'm an alright MC check out my tracks up here called Blacklisted and Floating Castle got a couple of the best NY underground rappers featured on them that put me to shame. Thanks again.
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Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
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It's just a DEMO ver up at the mo. Full version coming soon.
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Agreed tho. Nice one for taking the time fam, appreciate that.
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Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
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Where's the Instrumental?
If you let the music introduce the lyrical flow
it will inhance this track so much more ...Try it with an intro!
Not saying it's not good the way it is, it's just that the music is bangin'!
PEACE!
Arrangement will be way more complex when it's actually finished. Thanks for the review and taking time anyway fam, nice one.