Nice feelin it. Likin that UK accent. Hook is off the chain. And you sir are no UK eminem and that in my book is a good thing. Keep your sound comin, good work. Excellent writting skills with voice execution.
Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
Thanks man, it's a pop track, but I like to think it's quite a sick one. Going to get an actual singer to redo the chorus tho! Haha! Glad you like it man and thanks for taking the time to say so. You should have a listen to my other tracks Blacklisted and Floating castle, that's some of my more underground stuff, featuring some SICK mc's. Peace fam.
thx for ur reviews,i like this 1 i dont normally listen to this style but i do like eminems traks it reminded me little of him pitty it cut off at end but i still enjoyed it thx alot
Nice one for the review star, glad you like it. Check out Blacklisted and Floating Castle if you want to check out my more hard-core stuff, features 2 of the best underground MC's in the states right now. Safe fam.
wow! this s*** is off the hook! love how the guitar and piano fit together. everything about this track works. "murder you in front of your crib...like John Lennon" nice!
I think the lyrics sound good because its balanced out with a low base sound. A lot of lil wayne songs are like that, which is why I think they often sound dope. The lyrics sound good too. My only thought would be to maybe break the chorus up with another line after saying it three times but thats just something I would try. Good work!
I agree with you actually, that was what I told Final when he sent me this rough. Wether he changed it or not I don't know till I get the final version back.
Agreed tho. Nice one for taking the time fam, appreciate that.
I do admire what you have going on here, Your beats are unique and seem to grab your attention. Heck, check out my you-tube, i would love to take a couple of your tracks and host them for ya,, nice work here...
Beat starts off with a EPIC feeling. Gives me goose bumps(no homo). What ever was done to the hook sounds very good. He used good words to match the bassline for the hook. I feel that makes or breaks a hook. What I do not like is, his style on this one. Comes off Eminem-ish to me. Sounds tight, Im just not a fan of that style. Beat definately EPIC though, much props.
Feelin it. Good work with the beat break down. Love piano's, sounds sick with the guitar. Both rappers came with their A game.
Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
Man what a groove!
Where's the Instrumental?
If you let the music introduce the lyrical flow
it will inhance this track so much more ...Try it with an intro!
Not saying it's not good the way it is, it's just that the music is bangin'!
PEACE!
You're right man, there's no instrumental on this one to keep peeps from looping a part of it. As the whole loop of the track is only 4 odd bars and someone could easily record it into their soundcard and just loop it.
Arrangement will be way more complex when it's actually finished. Thanks for the review and taking time anyway fam, nice one.
Thank you fam, much appreciated. Check out my other track Floating Castle, it features the same MC and another big boy underground MC called Niles. I'll be keeping an eye out for your stuff too fam. You got some sick beats.
ugg all i can say is good job i have nothing to say that can improve this and i have nothing bad to say about this buut nice nice and even nicer and again the scratching makes it somthing ;) can you scratch my back... lol ;)
ok i had listen to this erleyer but as i said i didnt have much download left so it cut off like 5 sec into it lol but now im sorted... i like this good intro and great use of acapellas i like the slight wobble bass init when the piano comes in at 1:47 iv not listend to any other of your tracks yet but this has defo got my attention so expect more reviews within the next 30min lol :D
easy get in the top hundred with some sick vocal hooks i mean the bass is sweet and the beats are tight, shows what can be done if you have the time and money i like it all the best.
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Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
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It's just a DEMO ver up at the mo. Full version coming soon.
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Agreed tho. Nice one for taking the time fam, appreciate that.
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Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
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on The Floating Castle Version 3 by phantomhim
on The Floating Castle Version 3 by phantomhim
Where's the Instrumental?
If you let the music introduce the lyrical flow
it will inhance this track so much more ...Try it with an intro!
Not saying it's not good the way it is, it's just that the music is bangin'!
PEACE!
Arrangement will be way more complex when it's actually finished. Thanks for the review and taking time anyway fam, nice one.
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peace
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peace
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I'll be keeping an eye out for your tracks fam. Take it easy.
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Glad you like it fam, nice one.