Music is good. Good job not heavily compressing the vocals (like soooo many others habitually commit in error). The only issue I hear with this song is that the music is "above" the vocals and doesn't invoke a desire to have the song as a "favorite". Try dropping the guitar (or synth, if that's a synth & not guitar)& other non-percussion instruments under the vocals. Let the bassline ride over the vocals. Keep everything else the same (they're fine). Just some listener advice.
on back to life ft nickstonestreet by marchibou