I like this beat, it's got potential. Just a couple of suggestions...one, the vocal overlays on the beginning of the joint, I get what you're trying to do, it just becomes too confusing, it needs to flow together more. It's like the vocals are fighting each other.
Second, the funky worm in the hook...nice touch, but it needs to be refined somewhat. The worm is all over the place. It's good to go off in different areas with the funky worm, but not too far... the idea is to sell the hook, not just the worm...and as it stands, the worm takes the focus off the song.
That being said...the beat is fire...and the production is tight and crisp. I'll definitely be checking out more of your beats.
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Second, the funky worm in the hook...nice touch, but it needs to be refined somewhat. The worm is all over the place. It's good to go off in different areas with the funky worm, but not too far... the idea is to sell the hook, not just the worm...and as it stands, the worm takes the focus off the song.
That being said...the beat is fire...and the production is tight and crisp. I'll definitely be checking out more of your beats.
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on BURN ONE by THEDON626
on BURN ONE by THEDON626
Cheers!