mindhiest

wow great

nice work

Thanks for sharing! great track!

i love it
thank you.

nice!!

thank!

love it, really good.

Hello Sir, Can I use this Track for project video ?

Nice heavy mood!

Love it! Definitely does sound mysterious...

your timing of music with video is excellent. i like the moment when the girl tells us to stay quiet. creepy that moment of a woman rocking an empty crib. beautiful writing.

YOU KNOW THE RULS OF DEAD

kick ass track well done

This is really cinematic above all....can't be any other genre. When I listened to the track it was giving me constant feeling like there was a TV set switched on the movie channel somewhere near by, only that I couldn't see it. Grat atmosphere, masterfully composed and produced. The acompanied video is nice, but I prefer to listen to this without the video, so I can create my own images in my mind. Bottom line...excellent work!:)

Compliments_____Orlando

thanks for sharing

I love this type of music. You did a great job delivering that mystic effect & capturing the mind. I'll watch the video a little later in the day when I have time. Great Production! Keep it up. Also, check out some of my tracks when you get a chance & leave some feedback please. I'd really appreciate it.

Woow the voices are amazing!!!
nice work!

Nice for a demo reel! kinda slow at the biginning but i like it!

Beautiful track.

Didn't find it dark but epic punctuated with a disturbing atmosphere.

It's a great sound, i like how you built it
good work

friendly
Bleep

great work!! love it

Nice composition, interesting as it builds throughout the song. I'm not a big fan of long songs but this cinematic piece had my attention all the way. I wish it had some compression put on it as it would bring out more intensity and power as it builds but the idea is there and it's a good one.

Cheers!

Wayne

Im feeling this shit heavy. I love me some cinematic shit and this one really does convey a strong feeling reminiscent of some epic feature. And i def can see what your saying about the mind of a evil villain. However i get the feeling that this is about two characters, one good one evil, perhaps in the grips of a bitter rivalry that has been building in its intensity, growing in its need for some sort of resolution. I see the two characters each in their respective environment training for a fight, or building some sort of device/weapon to defeat the other. It could be applied to some sort of lord of the rings like saga with the montage showing the two armies training and getting ready for the climatic battle. Or it could just as easily fit in the form of a pair of boxers or fighters training in the gym and preparing for the big fight that would decide more then just who wheres the belt. Well done

Mindiest, Hello.

I like this! You've got a nice palette of sounds here that you're working with. The arrangement is good. Your wubbs and your dubbs are fluid. Meaning none of them sound jammed in just to be there, or as fillers.

There are a couple things that need some adjusting. Mainly just volume levels. Super easy fixes. There are a couple parts where the vocals just get LOUD, then back to normal. A few of the synth wubs jump way out too.
A little tip for the drums. In dubstep, they layer the snares. (and kicks. But I'm speaking only of your snare right now.) Usually with a clap, then add reverb. Other than that, the drums are good. Nice and clear, up front in the mix, and fully audible.
It sounds like you have some delay on the vocals, you might try adding a little reverb to those as well. The only reason I suggest that, is because of how spacious the rest of the song is. They don't sound secured. From my standpoint, anyhow. A little reverb would blend the edges of the vocals right into the track.

Overall, mister, this is a great piece. Just a few super minor adjustments, and it could be a top notch one.

Keep up the hard work.
Take care.
Sloe.

Mindhiest. How are you?

This is a decent piece. I have to agree with Evisma. Overall, it's a good tune, but the guitars don't quite fit. I think with the nature of this track being heavier in emotion, and low end, you probably could have played the guitars an octave, or even two, lower. At least the chugs in the beginning. Up until the 3:00 mark, anyhow. As far as the solo goes, like Evisma said, it did sound improvised. Or even a last minute decision from being caught up in the excitement of having a nearly finished track. I think the solo that comes in at 3;06 should be played slower with more deliberation, and restraint. With the orchestral backdrop being so massive and "heavy" this solo is too choppy. I'll leave a link here for you to check out as a rough example. Even if you don't like metal, this is a good example, because the band is nothing but massive and epic. Skip ahead to the 7:10 mark for the solo I'm talking about. Notice how it glides so effortlessly across the top of everything. I mean, for all intents and purposes, you have basically made a metal style song. There's just no drop D, or open A tuned guitars, or blast beat drums. lol, when I listened to it, I replaced all the instruments with metal guitars. (after listening to metal for 30+ years, it's just kind of how my brain works now!), and the feel is very similar.
Keep in mind, this is all just suggestions, and my opinions. Do with it what you will. It's pretty clear that you were going for a heavier, and epic piece. That's right up my alley, so I get excited to share my opinions, hopefully I didn't bombard you.

Here is the link. It's a band called Nile, the song is User-Maat-Re.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mJ4LpbUNs8