I mean the chords is there, but the execution of the track structure is off. I'm not feeling the Caribbean vibes. I get the combination tho, EDM/moombahton/vocal chops. I hear a lot of your influences from Dj Snake, Major Lazer, Kygo, and Dillon Francis. All very super cool acts.
My opinion, if thats what you'r into, I suggest study all there song structure, and analyze them. So you have a understanding. Also! Actually listening to Caribbean music is a huge help. If you ever heard of Diplo, he performs with his group Major Lazer every year for Carnival through out the Caribbean Islands.
I like this track. I',m probably not the guy to give vx advice... but I love the hooky melody goin on there. Sticks in your head... always a good thing
This is a great hard hitting track, with great party vibes. Mix wise, I think it's pretty good I think it's over compressed. The horns at the second half of the drop duck too much and it too sharply contrasts with when they come back up. If they were a bit more consistent, I think it would do this track some good.
This is a really good song though. Awesome work.
P.S. What's your soundcloud? I'd love to hear more music from you.
Well done. I like the beat change at :30. That sounds great! I can see this turning into an absolutely amazing trap song! One thing you could improve is at the end of the build right before the drop try to create a pause between the build and the drop. That way it creates more of a contrast between the build and the drop.
Great job man! I'm also a young producer(16) and I'm in the process of making a tropical-ish house song right now. One piece of advice for this song would be to make the melody a little bit louder. The chord progression that you have is great. The flute-like instrument that you have in the background could be given a more prominent role in the track.
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My opinion, if thats what you'r into, I suggest study all there song structure, and analyze them. So you have a understanding. Also! Actually listening to Caribbean music is a huge help. If you ever heard of Diplo, he performs with his group Major Lazer every year for Carnival through out the Caribbean Islands.
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This is a really good song though. Awesome work.
P.S. What's your soundcloud? I'd love to hear more music from you.
-Sheen
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