Very nice cdm! Nice melody, great vocals and nice song writing. How could she refuse to marry you after writing a song like this? Lol, one day if ever I should get married (again), I'll have to do a song like this for my beloved. Once again very nice song, D
Altho a few things i would deffinately consider changing would be too remove the drums altogether as they are way outa time and a little distracting.
And open you mouth a little more when you sing, your key is ok but your tone is really low so you need to open up you mouth or the words dont form propperly.
Nice composition tho fella. if you need any help with drum programming or sounds or anything really, just gimme a shout and ill be more than happy to help you out as much as i can:)
I really look forward to hearing this in the future as it grows into a fully fledged track :)
Man,...you really got some vocals. Your voice is straight. I think it just needs some definition to it. You got mad talent dont get me wrong. Been waiting on a collab with you. Let me know when you are ready! Kudos on the super smooth track. You make your beats yourself?
i totally respect what u have done here, it is very very good and something that should be respected. the 2 parts are better than each other, but the bridge that links them together was sudden and too drastic. u can try playing with out minds a bit. but generally, i would give u the 8/10 for the work!
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Great Work.
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Not a bad try at all fella.
Altho a few things i would deffinately consider changing would be too remove the drums altogether as they are way outa time and a little distracting.
And open you mouth a little more when you sing, your key is ok but your tone is really low so you need to open up you mouth or the words dont form propperly.
Nice composition tho fella. if you need any help with drum programming or sounds or anything really, just gimme a shout and ill be more than happy to help you out as much as i can:)
I really look forward to hearing this in the future as it grows into a fully fledged track :)
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Peace.
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I enjoyed this track.Special!!
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-DJ Tiberus-
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