Whoa, this is truly a great track!! Like the rest I love the vocals. The guitar work is great and you did an excellent job of setting the mood for this track. Yeah, this would be great for radio play, great job fav'd no doubt. D
hey man yet another great tune!..mite wanna take a bit of gain off vocals coz theyre distorting a bit but it is another wicked tune man! keep em coming! im a fan!
This song has a great feel. I like the blend of smooth acoustic guitars with a aggressive beat. Your vocals were good to. You should collab with her more.
Seriously!!!!!!! What bear said, other then the quality being off, this song could be extremely marketable!!!! you have a Beautifull voive man and you killing the guitar part, its nice to see another Canadian in the Loop "Eh", lol keep up the great work man you are killing it!!!
lol ive heard your work and i know its solid, so comments like that on my work mean double bro, thanks for listening and thanks x10 for bothering to review. means alot!
Pretty F'ing good. Looking past the db problems, it's a good song, well performed with commercial possibilities. It's worth taking another crack at recording, and mixing it. Keep up the good work.
lol really appreciate the comments. im receiving good words from alot of talented people including yourself and it means alot, im definately looking at doing a real take of this, this take was just to hammer out the idea while it was still in my head. thanks alot!
shit man...that's awesome dude..i love the steady string slap.. the overdubs work really well and the lyrics kick ass.. You should spend some more time on it and get it to where you want it. that's a hit song for sure.
haha i knew this song was your style thanks for the complements bud, they mean alot. Ive got a bunch of guys who i think ill get together with and do this as a full band :D so well see where that goes. anyway thanks for listening!
Hey again mate - I've heard this song for hours the latest days - I love it. It kinda reminds me of Lifehouse. Would be awesome if you could mail it to me :)
Anyway - mailing you the song later on today - looking forward to see what you can make of it!
Catch you later \o
You have really good control of your voice. I definitely enjoyed listening to your vocals.
The rock beat on the drums fits well. It could use a few fills added in, if you find yourself working on the track again. Other than that, no complaints on the rhythm.
It seems a bit boomy somewhere in the bass range, although that might just be my speakers. Actually, it probably is my speakers. Scratch that.
It's a little on the short side if you're going for the radio-hit-single length. I only mention it because I liked the track, but it ended before I could even finish the first pass through writing my review, so I had to move my mouse *all* the way to my other monitor and hit the play button again three or four times.
Great track.
EDIT: If you still have the source, just throw in a VST that does frequency analysis in there (Blue Cat has a free one that's wonderful) and figure out where it's a little too loud and put a notch filter (I think that's what it's called? it's the inverse of a band-pass and really narrow) in, or just mess with your EQ.
hey man, I really appreciate the long and thorough comment. Beleive me, the booming sound in the bass is there, it was very early work, and i didnt really know what i was doing :P and the drums are a loop, my first loop to be exact haha so fillers were not something i was capable of. and ull notice that most songs i have are really short, unless i collabed with someone. find it hard to keep them interesting, you know? haha. thanks again
downloading songs is pretty simple, it will be in the same list of options where you clicked to review my track. however, i have downloads set to off, so you wont be able to download my tracks. If you want any of them, simply let me know and ill email them to you, i just want to keep tabs on who has them thats all.
its hot man. the mastering was kinda etchy.
kinda got that rugged broke band sound. but then again it goes with it. lol
i like the song in general tho. keep it up.
loving the breaks, lol. wooooH!!
hey man this song works really well! you should do more like this! gimmi a shout if you want some guitar playing for one of your songs, i can play whatever you throw at me.
love the tune man keep it up!
Good job you two! Pretty music and a nice smooth essence here, laid back. The vocals were good, but I wouldn't use the flanger fx on them, but would go with more the reverb route. The beginning of the track I wasnt sure I was going to hear words, and the nanana later on muddies up from hearing your lyrics clearly. I would recommend not having the lyrics being sung at the same time as the melodic hum. Have them clearly in their own places. That is my only critique. I thought you both did a bang up job!
thank you very much for your comments and time. i agree with you in everything you said. this was a very early track, and tho i wont change whats finished i will keep that in mind in future work.
I thought I sent you a message here on looperman but I probably screwed it up. Man I'd be more than honored if you would work with some of my junk. You've got an amazing gift and I'd love to see what you do. Keep me posted.
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cheers :)
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Anyway - mailing you the song later on today - looking forward to see what you can make of it!
Catch you later \o
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The rock beat on the drums fits well. It could use a few fills added in, if you find yourself working on the track again. Other than that, no complaints on the rhythm.
It seems a bit boomy somewhere in the bass range, although that might just be my speakers. Actually, it probably is my speakers. Scratch that.
It's a little on the short side if you're going for the radio-hit-single length. I only mention it because I liked the track, but it ended before I could even finish the first pass through writing my review, so I had to move my mouse *all* the way to my other monitor and hit the play button again three or four times.
Great track.
EDIT: If you still have the source, just throw in a VST that does frequency analysis in there (Blue Cat has a free one that's wonderful) and figure out where it's a little too loud and put a notch filter (I think that's what it's called? it's the inverse of a band-pass and really narrow) in, or just mess with your EQ.
cheers.
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The vocal is amazing!
The whole production is gr8!
fantastic stuff!
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kinda got that rugged broke band sound. but then again it goes with it. lol
i like the song in general tho. keep it up.
loving the breaks, lol. wooooH!!
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as i said - this track is much better than anything I could have done with it. Thanks - keep it up!
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love the tune man keep it up!
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so what do you say?!
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