ToYouZulu

An exquisite array of electronic harmonies with an appropriate build up from the intro. Loved how the lead would fall into the background and then jut back in again during the chorus.

I did find however that the lack of variation in the harmonies made the song repetitive around half way through the choruses. I liked the distortion of the lead towards the end but it wasn't enough to stop the second chorus getting repetitive too.

Try splitting the song into more choruses with bridges in between where the harmonies fade and the main melody simplifies.

You've got a decent bunch of layers here. Try spreading them out for an intro and start with something simple. I came into music on the other end where I could layer loops to get great progressions but could never really make any of my own sounds.