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smallpaul

Groove is in the Heart!!
MERSEYSIDE, United Kingdom
Joined : 20th Sep 2008 - 15 years ago

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JHolmes
JHolmes 10th Jun 2009 02:11 -  14 years ago

on something in the air by smallpaul
The drums work well with the song in the intro.

The first lead voice that comes in feels a bit synthetic and too... robotic? Not as much feeling to it as it could have, IMO.

I like the vocal sample with the delay/reverb, although I think I might like it more if it was either a bit more clear or a bit less. It's in an awkward range of understanding right now.

I like the rodes-ish piano that comes in.

The guitar drop is a great idea, and it comes back into the song very smoothly. The drop into it feels very sudden. Maybe a low pass filter or something on the drums followed by a sudden snare or bass hit on the down beat that kinda reverbs out for a measure before bringing that in? Something to that effect would do a lot for the coherency of that section.

Again with the Rhodes, I like it... and again with the two bars of guitar for the finish, very nice. The abrupt change into the guitar works better for me when I've heard it once in the song already.

... and that finishes the first listen of the song. Thank you for posting it, and I hope you enjoyed my stream of consciousness I wrote as I listened. Take everything with a grain of salt, as I am no professional, just a guy who liked listening to your track.

EDIT: Second listen through... ignore the part about the stiffness of the first lead, unless you want to record yourself playing it. Also, the intro makes me think of Samurai Champloo's music. Wonderful anime if you enjoy chillout music and stylized sword fights set in an anachronistic Edo period Japan. Guitar drop seems a bit more natural now that I'm expecting it, although I would like something echo-y going on.
CrissNickssonn
CrissNickssonn 9th Jun 2009 23:55 -  14 years ago

on trancend by smallpaul
u impressed me again.another great track
keep it up
cheers
smallpaul
smallpaul replied Unknown - 2025 years ago
glad you liked it mate, and thanx for taking time to leave review.!!!!
CrissNickssonn
CrissNickssonn 9th Jun 2009 23:55 -  14 years ago

on Trance nation (remix) by smallpaul
awesome job man
cheers
weapons01
weapons01 9th Jun 2009 20:26 -  14 years ago

on solar by smallpaul
like this one mate good work keep it up
smallpaul
smallpaul replied Unknown - 2025 years ago
glad you liked it mate, and thanx for taking time out to leave review.
Salkizar
Salkizar 19th Jan 2009 20:40 -  15 years ago

on trance nation by smallpaul
Nice track man!! nice production work..
smallpaul
smallpaul replied Unknown - 2025 years ago
cheers mate, am lookin for a vocal for the track will keep y all posted!!
brandonjames
brandonjames 19th Jan 2009 15:57 -  15 years ago

on trance nation by smallpaul
pretty sick! i like that synthy sound that comes in at 3:45.
good work!
-B-
DustSounds
DustSounds 18th Jan 2009 17:45 -  15 years ago

on indiana jones by smallpaul
cool bass!

thats all i need today :)

keep it up!
phasturbo
phasturbo 18th Jan 2009 17:26 -  15 years ago

on indiana jones by smallpaul
Pretty good! How did you make the drum bpm's so quick and the sample lyrics slow? I have tried to do that before and cannot figure it out. How'd ya' do it? Thanks! Nice job.
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