I know what you're saying, but something feels "unsatisfying" about it to me. Here's another idea/thought. What if you leave it the way you have it but add just one extra beat then cut them off? So, it sounds like you are ending on the "4". But maybe try cutting them on the 1 of the next measure instead? In other words one extra kick drum on the 1 as well as one extra note from your synth then let them cut out and come back where you have them still. Make sense?
Overall I really like what you have here. The intro has a super nice build to it. I didn't lose interest which sometimes happens with intros. Ok, so this is just my opinion nothing more, but I felt like that "arpy/wah wah wah" sound that cuts out briefly at 1:02, I find myself MISSING it. Have you tried the same arrangement but instead just cut the drums out briefly instead? Might be worth a try. Same thing at 1:33. The vocals are cool but for my taste perhaps just a touch too much reverb/delay? Overall though I think you did an excellent job with this! Thanks for sharing. Hope I was somewhat helpful even if you decide you don't agree with what I said. :)
thanks for the feedback! I see what you mean at 1:02/1:33, i guess the idea was to give the first beat maximal impact but i could try keeping the synth linne. Also yeah the voice is super reverby probably should tune it down a bit.
Joe ha ragione, sostanzialmente l'unico vero "errore" quello sull'hi-hat, io ne avrei usato uno pi "noisey" a volume pi ridotto.
E' una produzione da club, e devo essere sincero, per me non stato facile ascoltarla fino all'ultimo, ma solo a causa della lunghezza. Intendiamoci, di per s non c' nulla di sbagliato, solo mio gusto personale. Per ho gradito molto l'atmosfera vintage che si respira lungo tutto il brano. Sempre per mio gusto personale, l'arrangiamento troppo minimale, di certo non pretendevo l'orchestra completa, ma trovo che... "manchi qualcosa". Cinonostante, tutto sommato il brano promosso! Bravo!
In efetti anche io penso che sia troppo lunga/ manca qualcosa. Penso che in totale la canzone deve durare max 6 o 7 min. Al momento di composizione non mi rendevo conto. Non sono sicuro che cosa manca pero .. qualche idea?
Commented on TP3 V3 by giuliomusic
hi beautiful
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!!!!!!
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eargasm!!!
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perfect
Commented on Fractal Geometry by giuliomusic
I know what you're saying, but something feels "unsatisfying" about it to me. Here's another idea/thought. What if you leave it the way you have it but add just one extra beat then cut them off? So, it sounds like you are ending on the "4". But maybe try cutting them on the 1 of the next measure instead? In other words one extra kick drum on the 1 as well as one extra note from your synth then let them cut out and come back where you have them still. Make sense?
Commented on Fractal Geometry by giuliomusic
Overall I really like what you have here. The intro has a super nice build to it. I didn't lose interest which sometimes happens with intros. Ok, so this is just my opinion nothing more, but I felt like that "arpy/wah wah wah" sound that cuts out briefly at 1:02, I find myself MISSING it. Have you tried the same arrangement but instead just cut the drums out briefly instead? Might be worth a try. Same thing at 1:33. The vocals are cool but for my taste perhaps just a touch too much reverb/delay? Overall though I think you did an excellent job with this! Thanks for sharing. Hope I was somewhat helpful even if you decide you don't agree with what I said. :)
Commented on Fractal Geometry by giuliomusic
GROOVY, I LIKE IT!!!
Commented on Fractal Geometry by giuliomusic
Good Job!!
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Amazing!
Commented on Nature of Moonlight by giuliomusic
Ciao Giulio.
Joe ha ragione, sostanzialmente l'unico vero "errore" quello sull'hi-hat, io ne avrei usato uno pi "noisey" a volume pi ridotto.
E' una produzione da club, e devo essere sincero, per me non stato facile ascoltarla fino all'ultimo, ma solo a causa della lunghezza. Intendiamoci, di per s non c' nulla di sbagliato, solo mio gusto personale. Per ho gradito molto l'atmosfera vintage che si respira lungo tutto il brano. Sempre per mio gusto personale, l'arrangiamento troppo minimale, di certo non pretendevo l'orchestra completa, ma trovo che... "manchi qualcosa". Cinonostante, tutto sommato il brano promosso! Bravo!
Commented on Nature of Moonlight by giuliomusic
so good
Commented on TP3 V3 by giuliomusic
Nice track!
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Yes I!
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Good beat...
Commented on TP3 V3 by giuliomusic
It is amazing! I believe it is just the right one!
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super mec
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Commented on TP3 V3 by giuliomusic
cool!!!!!
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cool !!
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very nice
Commented on TP3 V3 by giuliomusic
so cool
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me i like this track
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Its good a track
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really interesting structure. like it a lot.
Commented on TP3 V3 by giuliomusic
nice job pal! love it