First of all, congrats for your first one...than let me get some thought about make it better (of course music is very subjective, so it's only my humble words...:-)
1. you should use some bass or bass synth for it...
2. that part from 0.56 to 1.20 is ver dissonant for this harmony based rnb song...
3. that hammered lead piano is a bit 'similar' here...(maybe with another tune)
4. the song needs some more parts, specially a bridge instead of that disharmonical synth...
Anyway, it could be a good song but you should work on it...I think, that collab request is therefore...:-)
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Handshake, Danke
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Handshake, Danke
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First of all, congrats for your first one...than let me get some thought about make it better (of course music is very subjective, so it's only my humble words...:-)
1. you should use some bass or bass synth for it...
2. that part from 0.56 to 1.20 is ver dissonant for this harmony based rnb song...
3. that hammered lead piano is a bit 'similar' here...(maybe with another tune)
4. the song needs some more parts, specially a bridge instead of that disharmonical synth...
Anyway, it could be a good song but you should work on it...I think, that collab request is therefore...:-)
My handshake to you, Danke
if you dont mind do you have website/youtube channel to learn somthing for me. again thank you..