I guess that saying "we are our own worst critic" is true. This track doesn't sound terrible at all. The mix can use a little work here and there, but definitely not something you should trash .Try turning down some of the instruments a little bit or even the master levels itself. That alone might fix majority of the problems.
on The Eye WIP by MaxedOutMusic
on Through The Black - Good Times Ft TheGBsystem by MaxedOutMusic
Thanks for sharing!