Vicen, great pop song here. Your voice is a perfect match for the music. Thanks for posting the translation as well. While it is nice to know what you are singing, your music is universal in its appeal.
i can't find the lyrics page!
this has such a character i need to understand, he sounds like a broken-hearted man becoming a grump - the turn in the weather, the turn in events = the frost inside - a fragile one creating a hard surface - the story i imagine listening
I do not find them. But if you do not need the lyrics ... You've come to the Diana, in the heart. Anyway to see the subtleties:
Stanzas wrong, a lack of love.
She never came back.
Fallen Stars of a blue sky.
Night that never returned.
Remember to turn in the room
It's raining in your heart.
The sun shining, saying goodbye,
that summer never came back.
Raging wind, falling leaves.
Days will be lost.
Your eyes lost in a song,
that the time never erased.
And still raining in your heart,
tears into a song.
The lights on: more than two o'clock.
Insomnia in your room.
Flowers that grow around you.
The time of the sun returned.
Looking up your eyes in a song,
the wind takes you.
And still raining in your heart,
tears into a song.
The lights on: are more than two.
Insomnia in your room.
Remember to turn, avoiding the sun.
She never came back.
Hey Vicen, nice pop song. Your vocals sound right out front and are nice and clear, great job recording them. Maybe a bit more reverb to set them in the mix a bit more. I liked the instruments you chose for this, it has a positive upbeat feel but it is simply stated as far as the music goes. To me that is a very good combination, the right instruments in the right amount. I really liked this, great job!
The voice mixing with the rest of the music is really my ear has not yet mastered (every time I do it differently). I'm glad you liked it. It was a simple melody, but I liked from the first moment and I would not add anything more. I'm glad you liked it.
Una mas mi amigo esta me recuerda mis tiempos de la escuela cuando me escapava de ves encuando por ahi .
La verdad en cada una de tus canciones se aprecia la originalidad de cada una y esta no es la esepcion cada ves ves que te escucho siempre surge esa particularidad de tu personalidad grandioso tesoro que tienes muy unico
Cool rocking dudes!...got that hot shuffle beat that makes people get up and dance!..I really dig the vocals on this one man...smooth and with a smokey cool vibe..rock on! diggin it!
cheers Dave :)
Superbly done Vicen & abnerbesares....very smooth vocals...perhaps it is partly the language but you do it very well...liked that little saxaphone part placed nicely in the mix too.....good one....Ed
Hey Vicen!
Really like this song. I have to agree that the combination of you and Slap is awesome. The bass, guitar, horns, and vocs all go really well together. Downloaded.
You and Slap make a great musical team Vicen.....horns are great (as usual) and very nice work onnthe guitar parts too...Vocals fit like a glove....great track you two....more.......Ed
Thanks for sharing this great tune with us. I liked it a lot, and the Sax playing by Slap was great as usual.
I didn't understand the words, but it didn't matter as the music was very well done and enjoyable.
Thnaks again for your comments on my music as well.
Randy
wow - sweet tune - very original - amazing guitar chops - and I like the vox out front like that - cuz they sound great - I actually really like the mix you have here. Great sax - maybe bring that to the center (seems out of balance on the left in my phones). How did you record this bud? Sounds like it was done in a real nice studio in NYC with live drums - only thing missing is the backing ladies in my mind - love it - glad we're back up and running!
Thanks for your great comment. The truth is that the sax was recorded Slap, and it sounds wonderful. I look at this. And the girls, that would be wonderful ... I also started hearing them in my mind and would sound really good. I'm glad to hear you again.
awesome playing, very original sound ... great song!!!
I wished the drums would have been a little louder and the vocals a little lower ... a more balanced mix so to say ...
but anyway: I really like this track!
much fun to listen to!!
thx for sharing.
Man, I enjoyed this one! Very good feel and groove. I just wish I had paid more attention in spanish lessons back in school so I could pick up more of the lyrics!
MR V. im with you on this one all the way. my foot is still stomping.Slap was the perfect sax man for this HOT ROCK.Good to hear your still at it.PEACE.THE MACK MAN OUT.
Yeah....that big 6/8 beat gives it a nice blues/rock vibe for sure...very nice delivery on the vocals & the guitar is sounding rocking good to my ears....You two make a good team...well done...Ed
Hi Vincen - I love the stuff you do with Wayne - this one is really neat, but I really wanted to let you know how much i love "A Silent Cry" - really touches my soul! Here's a review I left of it on Waynes page:
oh man - I LOVE this - what a great sound - this is the sound that I love - in every way! Its Holy to me, Wayne - sacred!
downloading and faving!
and the solos - and the piano - just beautiful dreamy wonderfulness!!
My fav of yers so far!!
Oh... and Vincen... it wouldnt be the same without you!
Your voice is just excellent and the words really are beautiful - and I love the backing vocal "aaahs" - this song just touches my heart and reminds me that the REAL stuff is happening on LOOPERMAN - my favorite source for music - new ...from around the world , from basements far and near - uploaded NEW music in REAL TIME - what a secret!
I'm glad you liked it. Above all the work I do with Wayne is always very special ... but "A Silent Cry" is wonderful. From the first time I heard it in the first mixture, it was beautiful music ... so good ... the lyrics I made in an hour, and takes only a recording. Then, as always, Wayne was to improve the mix. It really is a great song, a work which I am very proud that Wayne thought of me. Thank you for your words.
PS.: I'm sorry I took to answer you.
hey,
nice sounds you have*****5 star.. love the guitars...wish i knew how to play but i'm stuck using vst's, it's not the same and it's very hard to find good ones.. you have any ideas where to look.
But I am a looper, but this song, Allen plays guitar. I work with loops and a VSTI or collaboration. I believe that here in Looperman There is information on VSTI and look here: http://www.vst4free.com. Thanks for your review .... Ah, question in the forum or check there.
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A very nice job and an enjoyable listen.
Bear
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this has such a character i need to understand, he sounds like a broken-hearted man becoming a grump - the turn in the weather, the turn in events = the frost inside - a fragile one creating a hard surface - the story i imagine listening
Stanzas wrong, a lack of love.
She never came back.
Fallen Stars of a blue sky.
Night that never returned.
Remember to turn in the room
It's raining in your heart.
The sun shining, saying goodbye,
that summer never came back.
Raging wind, falling leaves.
Days will be lost.
Your eyes lost in a song,
that the time never erased.
And still raining in your heart,
tears into a song.
The lights on: more than two o'clock.
Insomnia in your room.
Flowers that grow around you.
The time of the sun returned.
Looking up your eyes in a song,
the wind takes you.
And still raining in your heart,
tears into a song.
The lights on: are more than two.
Insomnia in your room.
Remember to turn, avoiding the sun.
She never came back.
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Wayne
on Estrofas Erroneas by Vicen
La verdad en cada una de tus canciones se aprecia la originalidad de cada una y esta no es la esepcion cada ves ves que te escucho siempre surge esa particularidad de tu personalidad grandioso tesoro que tienes muy unico
buena cancion amigo
Sly
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on Mantis Nocturna-Collab Slap Johnson by Vicen
cheers Dave :)
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Richie
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on Mantis Nocturna-Collab Slap Johnson by Vicen
Really like this song. I have to agree that the combination of you and Slap is awesome. The bass, guitar, horns, and vocs all go really well together. Downloaded.
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Thanks for sharing this great tune with us. I liked it a lot, and the Sax playing by Slap was great as usual.
I didn't understand the words, but it didn't matter as the music was very well done and enjoyable.
Thnaks again for your comments on my music as well.
Randy
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on Mantis Nocturna-Collab Slap Johnson by Vicen
I wished the drums would have been a little louder and the vocals a little lower ... a more balanced mix so to say ...
but anyway: I really like this track!
much fun to listen to!!
thx for sharing.
peace, rei
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on Mantis Nocturna-Collab Slap Johnson by Vicen
And, as my partner Wayne said, hearing the song: Slap is the Man
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oh man - I LOVE this - what a great sound - this is the sound that I love - in every way! Its Holy to me, Wayne - sacred!
downloading and faving!
and the solos - and the piano - just beautiful dreamy wonderfulness!!
My fav of yers so far!!
Oh... and Vincen... it wouldnt be the same without you!
Your voice is just excellent and the words really are beautiful - and I love the backing vocal "aaahs" - this song just touches my heart and reminds me that the REAL stuff is happening on LOOPERMAN - my favorite source for music - new ...from around the world , from basements far and near - uploaded NEW music in REAL TIME - what a secret!
PS.: I'm sorry I took to answer you.
on El Hombre Libre -Collab AllenV- by Vicen
on El Hombre Libre -Collab AllenV- by Vicen
nice sounds you have*****5 star.. love the guitars...wish i knew how to play but i'm stuck using vst's, it's not the same and it's very hard to find good ones.. you have any ideas where to look.