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toven

cleveland, United States
Joined : 21st Jun 2008 - 17 years ago
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Other users have posted 7 comments on tracks by toven

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ir185017
ir185017 21st Jul 2008 23:08 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
hell i like the shidd real talk but your intro was a lil too long playboi hell how i got that bass line if ur using fl studio 7 its in vintage turn ur sus knob up fully and u have it
DEUCEBULL
DEUCEBULL 20th Jul 2008 13:22 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
change it up put some breakz in it and i' say speed it up a lil but hey keep doin it my dog cuz im bangin dem thingz jus like u my dog ima be comin bye mybe we can hook up on something
Jake_richards
Jake_richards 19th Jul 2008 10:26 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
Great use of my synth i dont think i could of made it work that well with hip hop.
mouko
mouko 16th Jul 2008 10:19 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
synth is too crazy but too repetitive man u can try to change it a little bit in some parts, beat is tiite and u can add more
keep it comming man
peace
mouko
sammmm
sammmm 16th Jul 2008 07:23 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
The synth lasts way to long in the begining.
This track has some good potential,just needs alittle work.
Im sure after you listen to it a few time's you'll see that you shouldnt have used the same synth threw the whole song

[by the way,the gun effects are hot]
ShogunGhostwriter
ShogunGhostwriter 16th Jul 2008 05:44 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
This is sick. I dig the intro and the synth, but the synth lasts to long and never changes. I think I agree with "Box" the drums need to be a little louder and maybe more frequent, but shit it's yo style so don't listen to what I say, it aint criticism. The gun effects are tight.
GameboiX
GameboiX 15th Jul 2008 22:43 - 17 years ago

on haven't titled it yet........ by toven
A few things that stood out real clear to me was that you needed a little more drums and less of the melody and that steel drum percussion was just a little too much but thats just my opinion you said be real with ya and Im just telling you what I think but other then that I thought it was pretty good so keep it up =)
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