Jeffiedillard

Excellent stuff with a lot going on - I love it !

TheKunig

Very clean and professional mix, you are a jack of all trades! nice work my friend. Larry

Nice track. The switch up's are particularly ill. It gave off a street cred b-girl vibe (like elements of fem dripping out of the inside of a brick)

love this

this is amazing, one of my fav tracks on here

Very nice piano,
I like your voice a lot!
Beautifull track.

Cheers

~Eighteen

Very simple and very effective. The traits of every great song!
Well done. And i enjoyed the spoken word too. Keep it up.
Blessings - B.

Ain't it so true - what you said? Love this one. Love the trancey repetition of the beat and the spoken vocals, and then the singing comes in right at the right time. Great work.

you did a very good job, i wish i could work with you some day:D

Hey , nice work, sorry about the emotional pain you might be feeling at this time, I know relationships can be hard sometimes. As a producer and artist as I listen too this, I think that we could do much more to build the emotional cascade that needs to be expressed. For instance, If I had your acca-pella I would just use the piano and maybe a pad at first and build it until later in the song then using percussion and drums towards the end in an explosion of emotion, and then end it by bringing it all back down to just a piano and your voice. In that beginning section I would also add some interesting stereo delay to show the wide scape of the emotions being presented. But that's just me hearing something sweet and wanting to take it too the Nth degree.
Cru

Yes totally agree with the comment below. You could make some good track out of it. It sounds very interesting

First of all
respect for this mindset
the glory of humanity, is dedication
to loose something you want for someone you love
it doesnt matter
the "thing" can be everything even your life
and a dark world can be bright with this light

however lets back to the bussines :D :

the track is just a loop I think it would be better if you add some FX and etc on it

on 1:19 we have a beautiful choir that can be better with adding a chorus effect

nothing more
Kind regards
J_

Very poetic and soothing to the soul, a song that creates balance.Nice!!

hey there , new to site so missed this one ,
great track like the vocals a lot
look forward to you putting some vox bits up
would be well up for doing a ickle mix of this
have a listen to my dnb see what ya fink
off to listen to some more off ya page

peace n light
klandestyne

hope to hear some new stuff from you soon!
I've got a track that i'd think you'd be perfect for

let me know if you're up for a collab

wooooooow.....

FREAKING AMAZING!! I JUST SAW THIS! very well done! never knew someone could sing such beautifully on one of my tracks! i really enjoyed it! Great Job! :)

Amazing vocals, you have real talent.

I have a better mix this one is for the crowd, I took the liberty to chop it
up a bit...Hope it works for you...
If you'd like the better mix, just PM me and we can hook it up...

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/163380#comments

Peace...TG.

You have a fantastic clear voice Jeffierenee...good to hear a song done with this kind of diction...It was I very short listen but gotta say I enjoyed it...could listen a lot longer to this kind of talent....well done...Ed

You have a beautiful voice :) Lovely song.

Nicely done .

just instrumental version seems short to me .

regards.

good work , nice moments :)

Hi, your vocals are awesome and sit with the music track so well, just a point, vocals sometimes are fighting to be heard of the music which is a shame, but with some EQ balancing and mastering you could take this track to another level. Brilliant stuff.
My best wishes,
Mark

nice sound!