Jeffiedillard

I love the vocal....piano takes over the top...

Reminds me of this:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162891

I really like what you got thus far. But as stated by @promenade, you need more dynamics going on. You should fade in the intro and fade out the track. I think you should also take the drums in one point of the song and add in a sweep effect after like 4 to 8 bars then bring them back in. When you do that, you can also put a high filter on the main sound and slowly automate the high filter during the 4 to 8 bars. This is just food for thought, what you have as of now is awesome and can't wait to hear the finished piece.

Keep up the great work!

I think this will need at least one breakdown section because it is far too hypnotic for a proper tune. Also you may consider fading-in or building-up the track.

Emotional description, is him the love of your life?

Hi I love that vocal.

Awesome! Good work! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed my song! Beautiful voice too!

Very nice one. Great job!

I like how the strings emerge toward the outset. I like how you take everything down except your voice towards the end. beautiful song, voice. super work. congrats!

What a heartfelt song and voice...can't say that I know all of your songs but this outstanding...hopeful and sad, deep and 'chartish' number...not much can produce this production...all my hats off, Danke

Great track....love the vocals....splendid!:)

Compliments_____Orlando

amazing piece i love the darkness yet beautiful melodies and sounds going up about, the voice sounds amazing but i find it a bit raw "Unmix" and a bit over the song, also careful with the letter "P" they tent to pop in the mic a bit louder.

Overall amazing track loved it very much, and cheers to the singer. :D

joint is dope. you hit right on the money shortay

what a nice sound makes me wanna go have some fun love it !!

feel you...

Your voice is beautiful...

Love it ... you should definitely find the one who gave you the inspiration...

that phaat bass thoe.
too good

Really good work, I was being chased thru the streets of NYC, listening to that! Ha I love how the end of that actually begot the name of the song...down to the last bit!
Cool!

Just... WOW!

Hi!

I just loved this beat so much I had some vocals come to me. I hope you like it? thank you for sharing such an awesome track!. Here is the link:

https://soundcloud.com/1carrotheart/nothing-left

Not my usual genre but just cruising through the featured tracks and this caught my ear. Pretty cool and the production sounds great. Nice job.

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The bass is powerful. nice mix of your kick and low-end elements. Once you get into the thick of it, say around 1:09, I would enjoy perhaps a bit more of the lead sound and a bit less of the bass. what do you mean when you say this is for your book?

Nice production , i enjoyed this .Good job

damn i love it !! you killt the track !! If i use, who do i credit ?? writing to it right now.. i cant write because im just vibing so had right now.