trueindra

this is good track as well it has many emotional peaks for me. U got skills

I chopped up the different sections and turned it into a 3 or 4 min track. Very Nice.

This is very good. it could get a great instrumental. Keep working on it!

nice beat sounds like you just need to loop the piano at 4 to 6 bars and bust it again. This is major tho bruh!

Like how this sounds. It is very, "deep". Also has a nice tone to it

Yohoho - Cool one to rap on man!

This makes me sing. And thats a good sign.

I realy like it a lot

stay tuned
joe

PS: would it ok for you if i would (try to) sing on this one?

Interesting track here. I like it. Although I think you got the genre wrong. This sounds more like hip hop to me than Electro. Electro sounds mainly use synths. Hip hop uses piano and string sounds such as this song. Which is why this fits more in the category. Other than the wrong genre. This was a great listen. Thanks for sharing!