I can try if you feel I would be someone for the track here is my music if you feel I am what your looking for i'll download it and give you a sample http://soundcloud.com/mayo-music
HI. This is pretty decent but I have one structural suggestion for you:
Don't go with the second drumless breakdown at 1:40. I don't mean get rid of the section - just add drums to it (maybe some new, more powerful ones) as removing them for a second time kind of rips the energy out of the track that you've already built up.
And 2:44 brings us another drumless breakdown/outro so it's a bit too formulaic and could be made more interesting.
If you get some decent vocals, I can hear this working well as a pop song.
hi. so I can only say that finding someone to sing over your track is a very rare event on here. I posted many tracks so far but there was only one vocalist who spontaneously created vocal part to my track (which was cool).
but anyway good luck!
to me there's too much of strange frequencies coming from the background synth throughout your track. but piano and other synths are ok.
What is this end of song. toc toc toc ... there was someone in there? ... have you listened to the end? ... My god .. it's disappointing and I'm sure you can do better ... bye bye Man!
Good start if it's your first ... Continue like that ... In my opinion, we need more relief in your bass and soon drum. To listen to you again. Thanks and bye bye man!
Okay should I post the song on youtube with lyrics when it's done and then send you the link ? Or try and post it on here… I wrote lyrics and recorded on my computer but I still have to get your permission… but thank you so much ! I would give credit to you too if you would like !
Yes sure! you have my permission to post my song with your voice and lyrics! please send me the link and yes, i would like to receive credits. thanks and for any question or requiest please write me!
Hey ! I am a recording artist and singer/songwriter and was wondering if i could use this beautiful track for my new song i think it's perfect… I would love it if i could use it ! Please let me know asap.
xoxo, Ivy
Hei! Nice to meet you! Sure! I'm honored! Please let me listen the entire song when you have finished!!! And if you would make a entire song with me, i would be really excited! See you
This is really cool...very catchy, uplifting, full of earcandy melodies...
But! my problem (hope it's only mine) that your snare sound isn't at the same level than the whole song...in quality, I mean...may I ask, what are you using for the drums?
If you make some changes in the mix (piano is too loud sometimes) it will be a chart hit...
Hi Danke! Thanks for the comment! You made my day! I know i have wrong drums and piano in this song. Lots of things are wrong, and i'm so sorry about that, but i've never used the pc to make songs. This is one of my first try and i'm not really good i know ahah. For the drum i use MAGIX MUSIC MAKER 2014. If you have some advice or even if you wanna help me to make another song please tell me! I would love it! Thanks and sorry again for my mistakes! See you!
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Don't go with the second drumless breakdown at 1:40. I don't mean get rid of the section - just add drums to it (maybe some new, more powerful ones) as removing them for a second time kind of rips the energy out of the track that you've already built up.
And 2:44 brings us another drumless breakdown/outro so it's a bit too formulaic and could be made more interesting.
If you get some decent vocals, I can hear this working well as a pop song.
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but anyway good luck!
to me there's too much of strange frequencies coming from the background synth throughout your track. but piano and other synths are ok.
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xoxo, Ivy
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This is really cool...very catchy, uplifting, full of earcandy melodies...
But! my problem (hope it's only mine) that your snare sound isn't at the same level than the whole song...in quality, I mean...may I ask, what are you using for the drums?
If you make some changes in the mix (piano is too loud sometimes) it will be a chart hit...
Much respect, Danke