Ok dude. So its your first song. My advice is listen to some trance songs like tiesto, airbase etc....to get a structure of how a song should be in your head. With kick drums hats etc....Then take a simple bassline, put a kick on it and take it from there...bit by bit...The problem with this tune is there is no structure or definite kick drum sound. But trance is difficult to get the hang of, so keep at it and you'll get better with each new track!! Hope that helps.
on Dreams & Nightmares by cullum14