sunnydas01

Basically, it's a great concept. This is a type of song that once you take everyone's advice and apply it, it will be a hit. You did a good job.

I would recommend looking at your "Why" you produce. If your focus is making the best experience for your listener, then you'll automatically prioritize certain things, which in this case is the vocals always being heard easily.

Keep grinding bro

Nice melodies you have here! There are some mixing problems though, primarily I would really lower the volume of the drums.

There is a lot of bass on this track. Considering that it is consuming the vocals and just about everything else, I would suggest pulling it back a bit so that the track can breathe more. Overall, a good remix. The vocal was a hair too quiet for me but that is only my preference.

Brado

This is pretty dope! One thing I would do is cut out everything right before the drop. I noticed that the melody kept going and the rise effects didn't stop until basically right before the drop. I would either cut out everything before the drop or just leave the piano melody sort of how the original is. Otherwise, how you have it now there's not a real difference between the build and drop and it makes the drop sound weaker because there's not much more energy than during the build. I would suggest maybe leaving the piano melody how it is but for the last two notes cut out everything else.

This is a pretty cool and unusual song... I can't say that I've heard the original, so I don't really know what you've done. It's got a good pop vibe to it. Someone said there is too much bass, and I find it funny. Funny because this "future bass" genre seems almost strictly devoid of real bass frequencies, including this track. Also funny because this track taken without genre reference has little movement in my sub. I'm not sure the disparity between my thoughts and the previous commenter, if it is personal preference or simply listening device. Who knows. Either way, it was a cool song!

Nice track, there's a little too much bass for me, but the bassheads will like it for the same reason

synth stabs between 1:10 - 1:20 seem a little weak

the same synth stabs between 2:30 - 2:50 sound better

overall nice track. the only real flaw imo is the 10 second synth stab section 1:10 - 1:20

-Dan