the vocals need to come up a bit in order to fully understand what you are sayinh...it's tough to make out...you should run your lyrics through a clarity-type filter in order to get rid of the backnoise...the beat sounded pretty intense and I was lis liking what i could hear...the hook is tight...just need to clear up the the issues
Thanks for the tips, I have ben rapping for over a decade but this was only the fourth song I have produced and recorded on my own so I have a big learning curve ahead of me yet. Tips like yours are greatly appreciated.
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